Earth X Hulk - in 2&1/2D

[Teyon]

Looking at it...I think maybe I should soften the lip crease a bit, huh?

[Fetus23]

Hey teyon! Nice hulk here...I kind like the hard line on the lip..The coloring is really nice...perhapes thinner bump lines around the eyes..Looking really good...I hope we get to see more!!!

:beer:

[Teyon]

Thanks! Taking notes...thinner lines around the eyes. Check. Thanks again.

[Teyon]

By the way, Fetus. The creature with the house on it's back....brilliant!

[Teyon]

bump.

[twitchy]

good job man! only complaint is the lines by the eyes. peace.




:airguitar

[Teyon]

Thanks!

[hewsan]

Teyon, following you here. You know that I admire your skills. If this is a painting, instead of going to be used as part of your texture map, believe that indications of more directional lighting would give the image a more 3 dimensional aspect. In my humble opinion, it is just a bit flat as is and not as dramatic or intense as believe it could become. Believe however that you know what affect you wish to present, so mention this as just something to consider.

[Teyon]

Good Point! Thanks. I'll try rendering a grey shot with various light setups and test out the process on those.

[pencil-head]

very cool
i think the lip crease is fine the way it is, but i would put a crease under the bottom lip for his chin

[Threedeemer]

Wow, so cool! Why not try adding some more shine on his ears, lips, and cheek area.

[Teyon]

Thanks! Will do.

[Teyon]

Taking into account some of the suggestions here. I still have a lot of work to do though....Thanks again for the help!
http://members.lycos.co.uk/teyon/Images/models/hulk4.jpg

[hewsan]

The changes made have added greatly to the image. If i can suggest... the gloss on the lower right neck region and especially under the jaw line seems a bit excessive, i have the impression that this is supposed to represent perspiration, but instead of lying on the "skin" appears on my monitor to be of one horizontal level and not follow the contours of the skin. And should be a minimal sheen where it is in the darkest shadow under the jaw.
The dimensionality is coming together, but the outer folds of the ear, still seems compressed down to me.
Just an opinion offered and could be based on differences in the way our respective monitors are set up.
But each version of this work i have seen has shown great improvements... best to you.

[Teyon]

Thanks buddy. I'll look a bit closer on my next revision and see if I can adjust what you've pointed out.

[sza_sam]

That's neat! Good job on the ear.

[Teyon]

Thanks! Have to add some shadow to the interior of it though...I think that will give it more depth.

[Teyon]

Update coming tonight....

[aehrick]

Originally posted by Teyon
By the way, Fetus. The creature with the house on it's back....brilliant!
Naah, not so brilliant, already done before. Called "Snail" ;)
Cudos // Aehrick.

[Teyon]

I got to the point where I had to call it finished. It was a learning experience for sure and while I didn't achieve everything I wanted with it, I now have the begining of a new skill under my belt. Thanks for all your help while trying to perfect the image!

Oh, and I was referring more to the creature itself than the idea of the house on it's back. ;)

Sorry to cross post but to all of you who helped me with the wip, here's the FINAL (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=60327)

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