creature: Dezern

[JonasNoell]

I like it so far, keep it up :thumbsup:

[Wiz-Wiz-Wiz]

Looking good :)

The only thing that looks a little odd, are the front legs, they appear to be attached to the body as if they have been stuck onto its side, rather than being a part of it. They also appear at the upper part (above the knee/elbow joint) to be a little feeble, it looks like there is a quite a lot of weight there for them to both support and hold, maybe a little bit more tone and muscle.

Hope this helps

:)

[bigB]

here's a update...I fixed the connection of the front legs...and added two little horns on his head.

http://217.122.16.11/3d/dezernwip2.jpg

and a side view
http://217.122.16.11/3d/dezernwipside.jpg
please crit and give some suggestions...

[bigB]

:surprised more then 100 views...and only 2 crits.....PLEASE people help me....I need crits and I more need suggestions because I don't really have a idea how to go further:shrug:
yes I should sorted it out before I began but now I ask you people for help....:hmm:

[rrobert]

okay: critics on the way...

His back leg is to thin, you should make it thicker.. look better!

but nice creature. What is his size approx.? :shrug:

:thumbsup:

[rrobert]

By the way:

To bad that his front and back leg are so entirly different... don't know ..hmmm....:shrug:

[bigB]

Thanks for reply
I made the back legs a bit bigger....
http://217.122.16.11/3d/dezernwipside2.jpg
and for the size something like this

http://217.122.16.11/3d/dezernsize2.jpg

crit it, als othe the head I don't really like it but I don;t know how to improve it:shrug:

[Wiz-Wiz-Wiz]

Comin along nicely.

The jaw looks a little odd, may need more definition in there, show more of the jaw bone, it should slightly come out from the side of the face, as their would be some muscle in there for chewing its food, then you have take into account is it a carnivore or a veggy? It looks like a hunter so give it a nice set of teeth, oversized and vicious looking, should help to add character.

How about having its tail longer, and look and act like that of a scorpion as a defensive and attacking weapon (hmmm not too sure about this actually but will let you decide)?

Again hope this helps.

[bigB]

that's a good idea about the tail...I will look how it comes along..:)

[bigB]

I tried the tail idea but no....it's not what I thought...

I added an extra too on the front legs, added teeth, and made the jaw better visuable. CRIT IT :)
here is an update:
http://217.122.16.11/3d/dezernwip3.jpg
and sideview:
http://217.122.16.11/3d/dezernwipside3.jpg

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