some spare time (first post)

[bumskee]

wow, :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:
nice pencil work there!!
u must have studies anatomy thoroughly, looks to be in great shape!, one little thing though, how about giving him some more facial expressions?? he does look a bit lost. besides that it's one of the best pencil i have seen...

will you be colouring them???

[baaah888]

very nice sketch work, kindda looks like a genestealer, that the marines killed. i dissagree with the expression thing tho cause he's suposed to be shell shocked.

one crit, his jaw looks to thin, and since he's a marine id think big strong jaw would be more apropriate,

[megra]

those are beautiful pencils.

i disagree with the jaw crit--after all, you're not going for a chara who's the stereotypical epitome of strength, i would think. his char design shows depth.

[gilco]

I want to thank everybody for their serious crits.

I'm delighted to read the developing discussion about the neture of the character. I was going for the broken, have no choice but to fight, man. I'm a firm believer in an interesting human story guiding the character design.

I'll be posting more works shortly.

more responses will be extremely welcome.

[rimmer]

here are some quick concept sketches I did. The concept is based upon the werewolf roleplaying game. Instead of a modern near future apocaliptic campaign I wanted to create a historic romen based story where the animal spirits of nature, werewolfs, werecrows and others fight a desperate battle against a demon infested roman empire.

crits will be most welcome!

werewolf: warrior spirit of a black wolf
http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=2386780

wereelk:shaman spirit of the elkfolk
http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=2386782

werecrow:thief spirit of the nativecrows
http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=2386781

roman hunter:
http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=2386779

[sochira]

yea ure anatomy is Xcellent

[melmann]

awesome concept pieces! Great pencils !
Hope to see more
:buttrock:

[William b. Hand]

Nice work, Rimmer! Especially like the very first pic... i think the whole thing works really well, and i love the expression on his face - perfect! That creature, even in its broken state, looks very cool... I dig the contrast between the aliens sortuv silly, almost harmless, expression and this guys extremely ernest look. I don't know if that was your intent, but it sher works for me! Are you gonna do anything more finished? Maybe inking and colour?:thumbsup:

[freddy7133d]

:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :thumbsup:

[gilco]

I want to thank everybody for their great crits!

bumskee/William b. Hand : I will probably give the works some color. we'll see if I can find the time.:cry:

for now I'm attaching 2 colored works just to build up an appetite for things to come.

the roman soldier was my first ever photoshop coloring.

the fumori is done with prismacolor markers.

enjoy everyone.

crits as usual are always welcome and appreciated!!!:thumbsup:

roman:
http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=2406626

fumori:
http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=2406627

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