character:savage dragon

[cgjie]

:)

[error-404-]

i like it a lot

something is strange about "clavicule"

overal good work !

[Vash T Stampede]

what's a clavicule?
:shrug:

[error-404-]

collar bone

sorry it was the french word :rolleyes:

[Beobrand]

Originally posted by error-404-
collar bone

sorry it was the french word :rolleyes:

The word "clavicle" is used in English too...

[DDS]

i simply love it, but i think the crest would need more work...maybe a good opacity/bumped texture would do the fact

congratulations :applause:

[M.Rogne]

Yes, it is. The clavicle bone is simply a fancier and probably latin term for the collar bone.

[Pyroscroll]

awesome stuff there :) one of the nicest character modeling jobs ive seen, the character actually has character :P (mean but built) very good design idea :) keep up good work

[cgjie]

I am very happy you like him !Thanks a lot for your comments.
The clavicle bone may be something wrong.
Pyroscroll:"one of the nicest character modeling jobs ive seen"
wow,I wish too...
now I have many deficiencies in modeling and lack anatomical knowledge.but I wish I can improve on these!
sorry this character is form spawn.com not my design idea.
My English is poor,especially write ability,improving...

:beer: :beer: :beer:

[cgjie]

this is another :)

[db23]

I used to read the dragon comics, lots of fun

Model is lookin great, although the veins in th earms in particular seem to me to be a bit overdone, and sort of just placed arbitrarily.

:buttrock:

As for the pose I think you could add a little more line of action, have the pose be a bit more dynamic, and it will really bring out the comic book look!

Looking Great though!

[davids]

that's a really cool model! i agree with error -404- the clavicle isn't quite right.. right now its at almost a 90 degree angle where the bone acually has a lump towards the center where the sternocediousmastideus.. (don't think I spelled that right) connects onto. Also your sternocediousmastideus is connecting behind the jaw where it should go more behind the ear. but those are little things.. looking great .. would love to see it animated! keep up the good work!

[Vash T Stampede]

Man I feel dumb right now http://members.lycos.nl/shakunetsuhadoken/Gifs/lilith-fingers.gif

ow well

It looksgood!

[S_3D_A]

I really like this model. Pretty much true to the comic charector. Really sweet man

[cgjie]

danb_vfs:
I am glad you come to that comics,but I haven't seen dragon comics.
yes, I agree the veins in th earms to be a bit overdone and wrong place.May be because my poor anatomical knowledge and only three pictures to reference.

davids:
thanks a lot for your suggestion on anatomy!In additionthis,may be, I thank my model lack of strength on the whole.
sorry I had deleted the bone before continued modeling:<
rig this character might too hard to me.

Vash T Stampede:thanks.

S_3D_A: I am glad.


:) ;) :wavey:

[cgjie]

larger picture:p http://www.cgchina.com/image/details.php?image_id=417

[Libor]

Inspite of anatomical flaws its a superb model, man!! Definetely desires stars:D

Keep posting another work!!:beer:

[Thox]

Good model. I was a fan of the comic book years ago, model is a good representation of the dragon.

Thox

[rrobert]

Like your model very much but I do not really like that thing on his head.. does not suit him.. :shrug:

:cool:

[LaoDong]

I have seen some of your works in CDV long ago, and admiring your hardworking! You have good sense of 3d models,but lack of details, don¡¯t damage the whole feeling with those unsuccessful details such as the veins of clothes, it does not put up the muscles under the cloth correctly.
Besides, the fin in the head is a little bit too thick. in my opinion, this fin should be like bat¡¯s wings.

[eh]

The model looks greak but it seems too synthetic ad some dirt, veins, blood, facial hair (back when it first came out he had a go-t) something to give it life. gj so far!!:D

[cgjie]

thanks again.
:beer:
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[Wmodeling]

Very nice !!!I arouse you ! ceep up strive!!!
We'll wait your great works!!
haha!!:applause:

[kokolxxx]

up~~:beer:

[Wmodeling]

!!:airguitar

[spunkman]

hi,i am cacooca in CDV!

this job is very great!keep on ~~~~~

[gL_spear]

great model!!!! nothing i can crit about... just looks good

[cgjie]

thanks again.
I will do my best next time!
thanks a lot!
:wavey:

[Napa!m]

I need similar muscles!!!!
:drool:

[cgman27]

WOW! this is such a cool looking character. reminds me of superhero from 80's.

You have wireframe?

[Dezzo]

he looks real cool!

good work man. :bounce:

but a sidenote: is he suppose to be darker? :p

but great work anyways :applause:

[cgjie]

This is wireframe.
http://cgjin.myrice.com/savw1.jpg

[cgjie]

another one.

http://cgjin.myrice.com/savw2.jpg



:wavey:

[cgman27]

thanks. That is very impressive. Excellent flow.

[sp00n]

good model :) reminds me a bit of carny's wasteman click (http://www.highpoly.de)

[bvicarious]

As a huge savage dragon fan, let me offer some critiques on the character:

-good proportion from top to bottom, i like how you made him as top heavy as he is in the comics
-I think the chest could be a little bit broader and go up a bit higher, right now it looks like he has a really long neck. maybe the collar bone should be raised a bit.
-good work on the face, especially the cheekbone. his facial features resemble the statue crafted by clayburn moore rather than how erik larsen draws him. if you wanted a more comic look the only thing i would suggest is making his neck a bit beefier so that the back of his head just slopes down, instead of protruding out as it does now.
-there seems to be a fin segment missing at the base of his neck

also might i suggest giving a cartoon shader a try... that'd be awesome if it had a real pen and ink feel to it!


awesome work man, i really marked out when i saw this... keep up the good work!



-b

[Zixe]

Yah very good model. This was from a cartoon. I watched it everyday :cool: tell they stoped showing it. Only thing i see thats wrong with it is the face looks a lot older then in the cartoon he was a young cope.

[cgjie]

A FREE WEB HOSTING I have got,ha, that's great!

:beer:
I have posted some new lager render about savage dragon.
Wish you like it.
bvicarious:your comments are great! thanks.
:wavey:
Zixe:hi :p he really looks older.

[OZ]

Just C O O L !:cool:

[LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR]

thats real nice did you use the tod mcfarlene toy as referance?:applause:

[-=SunDoWneR=-]

...someone get him another stereoid xD nICE model but too much detail around the front neck region.

HF

[IDownupI]

does he have 2 t-shirts?

[Garma]

The model is great, but work some more on the texturing

:beer:

[cgjie]

LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR:
I used three photos of spawn.com as referance.
Your picture is one of them.:beer:

Garma:ha yes ,there is no map on he,just noise
map of max.:rolleyes:

-=O-?oRm=-:thanks!

IDownupI:ha ha I don't know also.:p


BTW:Tod mcfarlene toy savage dragon is really
amazing.But my model is lack of stength and looks older, no
good ratio also....
excuse me ,my hero:>
Any useful comments are welcome!
:cool:

[valiu]

a really bad guy....but a really professional work here...
i tell you fox.....
we wait for his wife....

[cgjie]

Is savage dragon a bad man?
Ha Ha ,I don't know anything about him,just thought he is a cool guy.

:p


BTW:valiu,who is his wife?


:rolleyes:

[Zixe]

He was at first a bad guy but then something happen and he got hit realy hard or something (dont totaly know) and he lost all memery and the police took him in and he re-grew up to be a police vs all the other monsters. or demons whatever they were.

[Lethal]

I really like this one. I wish I'd be that good, I noticed that the lower body is kinda non-muscular compared to the rest, I mean the biceps are bigger than his legs. ....Great work tough

[valiu]

whoo's his wife ...that i do not know....that why i wait for it....

[LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR]

i love it the bieceps are surposed to be bigger than the leggs thats the design, :drool:

[mimosa]

:thumbsup:
so great!
I must put a jerk in!!!

[spooky3d]

Sweet modeling on the arms I like the size compared to the legs very true to the comic.Also the veins in the neck look good. Very nice job.

[shade_E]

your attention to detail on the folds in the cloths and skin are very impressive! Great work!

[eoin]

nice work, ..polished

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