Character: Bikini girl -- subtle one

[bigbad]

Freaky. Need more work. The first thing you have to do is to see a girl in a bikini. The hand on the left has the ugly-est thumb I´ve ever seen. Please look into fineart (http://www.fineart.sk) .

The head looks great but the body does not.

[rrobert]

indeed!! Work on it, like for example her bikini, it is way to large I think!
But it could be really nice :thumbsup:

[D.Q]

Study more about anatomy.

[DDS]

good work guy!!!!!!

i like the environment u gave 2 the scene.

I'd recommend u some wip posts before posting here, sure people will help you.

The hands aren't correct, and the bikini seems too big, keep it on, don't defeat

[dickma]

I started becoming lazy....

Setting up bones in LW is troublesome...Once I did it wrong, I had to clear all bones... and start it over.

And I am facing keen competitions here as there are so many breath-taking 3D images......Yes I got a feeling that I am defeated.

When I get an award from CGTalk? Sorry, daydreaming again....

May be I redesign the swinsuit....less clothing is better.

[xzevlin]

I think the quality of the overall image is nice, the textures especially and the modeling is well done. The pose feels very stiff though, it's not a very "Lookit me, I'm so sexy" kinda pose. If you want a subtle pose, there has to be more expression in her face to make that the focus of the image. The look on a model's face can have alot more interest in it than her body.

And if the bones in the hands are giving you a problem, find a pose where her hands are hiding behind her head or back. That's the easy way to solve the problem :D

[Darius43321]

ya this was made into a wip...and no one liked it and he refued to fix anything cause he didnt wanna make her "slutty"

[dickma]

To xyevlin: No, I won't use such easy tricks to hide the hands. I rather do it better to make it perfect.

Darius43321: I am afraid that after I change the swimsuit design next time, it will become X-rated. Beware!

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