WIP [secret project]

[JasonA]

looks pretty good! I'm not sure what I think of the head, somehow it doesn't seem very feminine... but a head of hair would make it look alot different. Those arms and hands look fantastic, I'd say you got them done perfect :) look forward to more,
:beer:

[I animate]

I agree, hair would go a long way to making her girlish. One other thing :hmm: the pelvic area is way to long for a female.

I should know, I is one :D

[Titan]

hey manfrd whats up dude
nice model......

I'd say that the eyes have a little too much bag under them, maybe smooth it out a little.

Other than that the top of the head looks kinda pointy.

Great model though...I love the forearm and hands!!!
great stuff as usual dude.....keep it up..
and By the way, why is this model supposed to be a secret?

[AdamT]

Looking good. To make the head more girlish I'd make the forehead less prominent, make the eyes narrower--more almond shaped, make the jaw much more square, and give her some nice cheekbones.

[Bizzaro]

Great job on the arms and hands! And i agree, the pelvic area needs to be shorter. Cant wait to see it with hair:thumbsup:

[SirManfred]

Thanks people! :D

Titan: Hey Paul, old chum! Thanks for your comments :) Why is the model supposed to be a secret? Uhm.. the model isn't but the reason why it supposed to be a secret is secret... i hope that made sense... lol



Anyways, i made some more facial work on her. Made the eyes a more realistic size and so. And i also closed the mouth to prevent occasional drooling :drool:
Uhm, as you can see, the face still needs work. I just thought i'd post an update before i go to bed. :)

http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/body18.jpg

[KingMob]

hey man looks good! head seems a weee bit big, but I really like it so far

whats the secret? :beer:

Ill keep an eye on this one man!

[betelgeuse]

As far as the face goes, try making use of the beauty mask. The proportions on it really do help.

Article from the Learning Channel:
http://tlc.discovery.com/convergence/humanface/articles/mask.html

Actual web site:
http://www.beautyanalysis.com/mba_youandthemask_page.htm

[SirManfred]

Thanks for your replies, people.
Here is an update.
I know the face/head still looks kinda screwed... im gonna fix it when im sober.

http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/body19.jpg

[SirManfred]

http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/body23.jpg

[RockinAkin]

Looks good so far,

You still need to work on the face though, it still kinda resembles a boy.
Try making the cheeks a bit more pronounced, and the jaw smaller and less so.
And round the head a bit more.

Keep it up,
-DivideByZero-

[SirManfred]

Thanks, dude.

Here's another update.
http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/body25.jpg

[comfortablydumb]

good job. I think if you make the eyebrows a little less broad and pronounced would take down on the mach factor a bit. Also when you get the hair on it will help it a lot.

There, you have been bumped. :wavey:

[leigh]

Looking good so far :thumbsup:

I think that the feet look a bit strange though - the toes don't look quite right yet.
The knees could also do with a little bit more detailing on the actual kneecaps - they should be a bit knobblier.
You could also perhaps enhance her actual hip bones :)

[SirManfred]

People! Give me some more replies or crits or whatever! :D Wake up and smell the coke! (the soda kind)

Anyways, here are some fresh renders.
http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/body26.jpg
http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/bodypt02.jpg

[TheFrumpster]

Wow, great pose. :beer:

[Titan]

awesome pose...get some skins on that beauty!!!

[SirManfred]

Thanks dudes! :D
Here's another one:
http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/bodypt03.jpg

[DragonKore]

Very nice. The muscles, hands, arms, legs, and all of the body is great. All I can suggest is hair, like other people said, and it should be good. You could also add an interior mouth (teeth, tongue, gums, etc).

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