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jogilvy

01-22-2008, 09:31 PM

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Title: Kitchen environment
Name: Jon Ogilvy
Country: United Kingdom
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay

This is an image from a short i'm working on as a final year project at Bournemouth Uni.
The project is based on getting plant type characters to dance to music without keyframing so most the work will be base on the animation side.
It would be nice for it to look as good as possible though so all comments more than welcome.

Vandaler

01-23-2008, 12:03 AM

Looking good,

Here are a few suggestions for improvements

- Sink is a bit flat, can use more specularity or reflections
- Area of the microwave is a bit dark
- You have a nice sun light effect coming in and you can perhaps exploit it a bit more.

Good luck !

JGW

01-23-2008, 05:51 AM

the dish and the sink should not be the same color, nice work.

AAGorji

01-23-2008, 07:22 AM

good job,
it's too dark for a day with such sun light!

rnd2k

01-23-2008, 10:03 AM

ugly and look very old like 3d from 10-15 years ago

jogilvy

01-23-2008, 11:44 AM

Thanks for all your comments. I'll try and make some imrovements.

Have you got any suggestions for improvement rnd2k?

rnd2k

01-23-2008, 12:44 PM

yes try to work more on mapping and details also try with different light setups to achive atmosphere, also work more on materials

jogilvy

01-23-2008, 02:33 PM

Thanks for your help,
The texturing side of my work generally seems to be the weakest, i do need to improve it a lot, especially in these images.

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