Female Head WIP

[flingster]

AdamT: love looking at your work like this...always stikes me as quality..not just hacked out but a bit of forethought went into it...anyways onto comment...only bit is ear part...top attachment to head is to high up i think...also the thin bit where the hole of the ear is..seem to thin and pronounced.

used hardly any reference material....jeez....ya need a medal!

don't suppose you could do me a favour could you and show me a wire of the side close up of the nose...also been reading that topology thread...but having real trouble with the nose part...:bounce: ....

[AdamT]

Originally posted by flingster
AdamT: love looking at your work like this...always stikes me as quality..not just hacked out but a bit of forethought went into it...
Thanks. I give it as much thought as my poor deflicted brain will allow. :)
anyways onto comment...only bit is ear part...top attachment to head is to high up i think...also the thin bit where the hole of the ear is..seem to thin and pronounced.
Yep, the ear needs work for sure. I hate ears!! I recycled this one from my self portrait model and made a few changes. Not enough....
don't suppose you could do me a favour could you and show me a wire of the side close up of the nose...also been reading that topology thread...but having real trouble with the nose part...:bounce: ....
Here you go:

http://bellsouthpwp.net/A/d/AdamTrachtenberg/Fem_wire2.jpg

And another render--I'm going to model the whole body if I have time:

http://bellsouthpwp.net/A/d/AdamTrachtenberg/fem_head2.jpg

[AdamT]

And just for good measure:
http://bellsouthpwp.net/A/d/AdamTrachtenberg/fem_head3.jpg

[That Adrian Guy]

Nice one, Adam!

The nose is to sharp, it's not feminine at all

you need more resolution in the top nostril area to control the subd better

the bottom of the eyes shouldn't sag like it is... give it support and raise it up. infact... if you almost flatten the bottom of her eyelids, it'd give a subtle smile/ happy expression (which adds to her beauty)

The skeletal structure around her eye needs some work... maybe try lifting it up around the eyebrow area..

YOu may want to add another edgeloop below the lips and above the jaw line for an even mesh / better control

-------------But hey... we all have different tastes, right???

[AdamT]

Originally posted by That Adrian Guy
Nice one, Adam!

The nose is to sharp, it's not feminine at all

you need more resolution in the top nostril area to control the subd better

the bottom of the eyes shouldn't sag like it is... give it support and raise it up. infact... if you almost flatten the bottom of her eyelids, it'd give a subtle smile/ happy expression (which adds to her beauty)


I totally agree about the eyes. Much more work is needed on the shape in that area. I don't know about the nose, though. I wanted to give her some personality--not such a generic pretty girl look. Thanks very much for your comments. :thumbsup:

[flingster]

thanks for the nose wire...appreciated.:thumbsup:

[Kotayus]

shes...uh....sexy......

Nice work so far, but doesnt look feminine, im thinking the nose/bridge/eye area...the eyes looked a little wierd to me.

[AdamT]

A little eye and nose tweaking:
http://bellsouthpwp.net/A/d/AdamTrachtenberg/fem_head4.jpg

[JIII]

the eye and cheek bone area needs to be worked on abiut more if you ask me. Women have much much higher cheekbones than men do.

also the nose is just weird, cant really describe it. maybe it would be more feminine if you shortened it a bit.

but overall great model.

[AdamT]

Okay, by popular demand, the girl has a nose job.
http://bellsouthpwp.net/A/d/AdamTrachtenberg/fem_head6.jpg
The hell with individuality I say! Besides, she was starting to look like an old girlfriend. :surprised

[phobos]

Good work Adam. The upper lip is too pronounced make it dissolve more softly. The problem with the nose is that it doesn't have nostrils. Make them more visible. The problem is that you have very few points there that don't help you describe it. Redo the nose cause it needs some more points.This is a nose from my model
http://users.otenet.gr/~jim08088/NoseForAdam.jpg
The eyes that you have created go only for chinese people. You have to fix the upper eyelid cause it's too on front. Bring it to the back to describe it better.

Anyway it's a very good start and I bet it will get better and better after some updates.

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