First female model

[TimWoods]

looking ok. but you need to sort out the collor bones, and you need some more detailed contouring.
fix the bum too! i stare at asses all the time, it needs to be more curved and the crack needs work.

good start, need to refine it now.
:beer:

[Bizzaro]

Alright, just a small update. Started putting more definition around her legs, and torso. And fixed the butt and the collar bones. I am also in the process of finding another web space provider....



Anyways, heres the update.
http://www.geocities.com/arthexpanthemind/female2.html?862214290130

[FallenSwordsman]

Good attempt so far- you've even put in some of the bones but I think the hip bone is sticking out a bit too far- its most noticable in the front view. Since you're working on legs at the moment, I'll refrain from commenting on them just yet til you're done.

[Bizzaro]

Thanks for the comment Fallen. I noticed the hips when I was posting:D. Feel free to comment on whatever. I am kind of jumping around, just modeling what I am in the mood for:p. And this time isn't any different.

I decided to work on the hands next, and got thus far before I had to call it for a day.

[Bizzaro]

Another view

[Bizzaro]

Heres an update of the hips

[Bizzaro]

And a wire frame :D

[phoenix2k]

nice start :)...

the subds are a little chaotic atm, but i'm sure you'll fix that soon...

keep going... it's looking good :)

[Bizzaro]

We have thumbs now:D. But the hands still need a lot of work:annoyed: ..... i hate hands :banghead:. I worked on the knees a bit as well, and the back of the leg. I think ill work on the head next. :bounce:


heres the update.

[Bizzaro]

front view

[FallenSwordsman]

Ah rats - I was just about to mention the hands need to be a bit more curved but you probably already know that. Yep hands are tough - like ears. But you won't get anywhere without having a good go at them and learning. One thing that sprung out at me is the collarbones - shouldn't they start low in the middle then rise up toward the arms rather than the other way round? Going well though all the same :)

[Bizzaro]

alrighty, got the head pretty much shaped out. Just needs the usually touch up, and ears. Would like to know what you all think so far.

[Bizzaro]

front

[Bizzaro]

side

[FallenSwordsman]

coming along nicely - the collarbones need to be thickened up a bit tho - and maybe try rounding her forehead more - have a look at pics of bald blokes in profile and note the shape then compare it with yours.

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