Vehicle: my new prototype, european cars inspired.

[mwkmn]

Looks good so far :)

Simplicity is the BEST! :D

In the first picture, the rear wheelarch seems wrong...

Maybe you could fix that :)

[jampoz]

I think it's too rounded, looks like a ball with tires, you should spend some time adding details on the chassis

[EighthDecay]

looks good,, I would add to the lower parts of the car,, but keeping it simple.. the rear C-piller seems think or not wide enough at the bottom,, would be cool to blend into the body more. Simpley cool, nice and clean,, I like the setting also.

[garyturner]

here the next:
http://membres.lycos.fr/garyturner/temp/gt-venane-wip08a.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/garyturner/temp/gt-venane-wip08b.jpg

don't find the goods settings for render

arg i forget the detail on the rear arch :/

[mwkmn]

Don't forget to add details to the taillights :)

You know, lightbulbs and reflectors and all.

I want to see some other views with other colours too! :bounce:



...BTW, your style of design is 'very much' similar with mine, what a coincidence :)

Good old square headlights and the grille along the same line...

Whoa :surprised

(...Maybe that's why I find this car sooo cool! :scream:

[garyturner]

thanks for comments guys :')

here the next
what can i do? i whant photorealism :/
http://membres.lycos.fr/garyturner/temp/gt-venane-wip09leger.jpg

(low settings for test)

[BigRanS123]

Add some more creases to the front of the bumper.

try to make the paint less shinny, make it feel like it has more depth. to the clear coat. looking good. Lets see more detail on the body. Like antenna holes and body panel’s crumple zones, those are for strength and are needed.

[Threedeemer]

Such a gorgeous vehicle! Especially great that you designed it yourself. :buttrock:
The tires in the last image have a slight luminosity to it.

[DXtreme]

hey thats a very nice work.... the concept and the modelling too!
did you draw a sketch for this or was this creating by doing?!
if you draw some could you post it?
but anyway it's a good concept-reminds me of guigaro or italdesign...

maybe the frontgrill is too shiny...would try a black or darkgrey one!

c ya

[cookepuss]

Have you considered adding a flecked paint to it? Considering the sleek nature of the car, I think that might be a nice little touch. The current paint job is just a bit "everyday". Great car design. Looks good so far.

[garyturner]

thanks guys

just an high rez and settings to see details.

default on the front grid disapear
http://membres.lycos.fr/garyturner/temp/gt-venane-wip09a.jpg

[garyturner]

more details and interior:

the interior in progress:
http://membres.lycos.fr/garyturner/temp/gt-venane-wip_interrieur05.jpg

and a test render, near 1h on a 1ghz with 768mo sdr:
http://membres.lycos.fr/garyturner/temp/gt-venane-wip12a.jpg

[jellyfish]

Very very nice. The only problem with that design is headroom. You must have to lay down like in the Lambo Countach, eh? :)

I think the only thing detracting from photorealism for me is the tires. They need to be darker and shinier!!! Also a very slight bump map would keep them from looking so smooth and perfect.

Oh, and the tires should be flatter and bulged out at the bottom, unless they are made of steel ;).

The brake caliper seems too fake, is there anything you can do about that? Also, I think the headlight covers need a smaller specular area, they seem to be kind of like not very transparent or worn out plastic, instead of nice and glossy.

Also, do you have other ideas for the emblem on the grille? That one seems to be Times New Roman font, which no automaker would use today. Maybe something techie, or just a symbol of some kind?

Besides those details, VERY nice!

jellyfish

[jellyfish]

There seems to be a little bit of irregularity on the side window seal, the chrome part isn't smooth -- is it maybe low-polys? Or perhaps not aligned perfectly. Maybe make this piece black to hide this little bit.

My eye keeps getting drawn to that area as not "real".

jellyfish

[Flash FROG]

Love the car.
Very nice round, futuristic design.
The gril looks nice too.

[garyturner]

really thanks jellyfish
i notice all and modify that tomorow

juste another view:
http://membres.lycos.fr/garyturner/temp/gt-venane-wip12b.jpg

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