'digerati' cover

[angel-o-polis]

:eek: woow absolutly wonderfull

[CGmonkey]

Lovely :applause:

[linzi]

Really nice work. I love the background. I would say that the gun doen't look balanced though as the rail looks too round to support it and her expression is maybe a little too vacant but then again I dont know the story.

I'm curious as to what resolution you are working at since you are illustrating for print?

[necron99]

:bounce:

cool! gun looks fine to me -

[Gezstar]

OK I've fixed her eye so it doesn't look quite so vacant - she's still meant to be staring into space though :)

[linzi]

It's cool. I really like your style. And I believe the only reason I felt that the gun was off balance where it's positioned is because of the edge the rail closest to us isn't sharply defined. I wouldn't change that though because it's in keeping with your style. :)Trying to be constructive here which is hard because I'd rather just enjoy the image.

I like this cover a lot and I love your colour sense. I'll be watching for it appearing on the shelves.

[shambler]

u did it again Geztar - well done!

[Kirt]

Very nice! :thumbsup:

First impression was that she was laying down flat on some horizontal bars. Now that I look at it again, I guess she's leaning on a handrail and the bars are parrallel vertically to the thick one that the gun is resting on. Kind of weird ...

I don't care much for the expression on her face either. She seems dead and lifeless. But these are kind of nit-picky things. I really love your images. The background buildings are just superb and really fit the environment. You get a sense that people actually live here. Nice!

Oh ... especially liked the Bunny building with the large bunny head poking out of the top. :D

[mage111]

brilliant, i love the use of colors for the scene. the sheets draped over the railing is great :-)

very pleased with this work :D

[Gezstar]

linzi - no that's totally cool. I really appreciate your constructive crits - they're dead on :)

shambler - peer, right? ;) Heheh, cheers man.

Kirt - cheers for the c&c. I was going for a kind of emotionless look on her face, cos the character's this genetically manufactured killer-type. And you noticed the bunny - nice one:buttrock:

mage111 - thanks man. I wanted the city to look 'lived-in', hence sheets, etc.

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