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jpiette
01-15-2008, 11:47 PM
WARNING: THE CONTENTS OF THIS POST ARE EXTREMELY JUVENILE

I got the idea for this from a rather interesting lunch conversation a week ago. The idea would be for children, a more goofy animated style. The theme? One giant fart joke. Please give me feedback, and since I'm posting it on a public forum, it goes with saying please do not steal my concept.

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Title: The Poot Box

Plot:

Young Lady Millie is a mideival noble girl learning the proprieties of high society. One day her mother gives her a gold, jewel-encrusted box called the "Poot Box." When asked what is is for, Millie's mother explains that ladies should always look and smell their best. A lady, she explains, shouldn't pass gas, as it is a most abhorous behavior. Therefore, just like the restroom, should you need to "poot," you should come back to your room and do so in that box. Millie understands.

Flash forward a few weeks later. Some thieves have broken into the noble's castle and stolen some valuable items, including a beautiful golden box. They bring it back to their place, where they proceed to imagine what all could be inside. Jewels? Coins? Secret deeds? They open the box to find out and...

With a VERY loud fart noise, the scene ends with the roof of the house being blown off, and the remaining structure erupting in a foul smell.

Characters:

Millie
Mother
Male thief #1
Male thief #2

Locations:

Mideival castle (small)
Small cabin/house/serf hut

amermaid
01-16-2008, 02:13 AM
Maybe it's because I've been listening to Stephen Lynch a lot lately, but I think this idea is great. Not only is it humorous, but it lets the female get revenge on the male who always boasts about his great "pooting" ability.

ALLWritety
01-16-2008, 03:41 PM
I really liked this idea! I think it would work very well.

Kev

jpiette
01-17-2008, 02:51 AM
Someone suggested that it would work better as a Victorian-era piece since that would seem a more appropriate setting than medieval Europe. I tend to agree with them. Thanks for the feedback!

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