my hooded gangstarr

[betelgeuse]

It's not bad, but what's with the pencil-thin neck?
You might get more responses by posting a bigger picture so we can have a better look at it.

[Emberghost]

The T-Shirt and the pants look very nice except the head could use a little more detail, its just round with some eyes and an extruded mouth. Other than that looks like a funny little character:D

[MediaM]

sorry about only one pic we have really slow internet in RSA
and i've tried to make the pics bigger and save them as gifs
but it doesn't seem to work
if you know a good way to have big pics with a small file size please let me know

thanks so much for the crits so far i'll start with the head asap

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[polygun]

dude, change that neck. it outshines any positive aspects of your model and makes the whole thing look plain odd.

and i think the eyes may need some work too, he looks like an invader from the planet mars or something

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