Fun factory - short film

[BigMouth]

Nicely animated! I didn't understand the story and couldn't make sense of the carny's motivation, but the ending was great. I think the manager/boss shouldn't have sworn, it felt out of place. Anyway, great job.

[YakZSmelk]

I don't think he ment to be mean I think he was just upset because he wanted to be on the ride. And I do agree with the 'bleeps' seemed out of place. But overall I liked it alot! Good Job

[Banshax]

These big mouths laughing and screaming are hylarious.
Love your use of color to convey a very rich mood.
Story made enough sense.

What I found most inspiring however is your stylisation of reality. Like the on and off button follow a really imaginative set of rules. 5 star imagination.

[Ajouz]

Nice! the story is entertaining, I like the direction, the characters, and the choice of camera angles. One thing bothered me though, the reflection on the eye lids looked distracting. Other than that everything looks great.

Ajouz

[OmarFernandes]

like the colours and the overall look :D

[Ville]

Hell yeah man! :buttrock:

it came out amazing! Too bad you weren`t at the grad, it looked great in the big screen and people loved it, and me too. The animation is really good, and it looks amazing! Nice job! 5*

[Zaak]

Hey Zizou,

Great job.I think the styalization works well,and You did quite a good job with the lighting too(your favourite..haha..).The grad was great.You should have been there..


Zack

[X-RaiZen]

niii =)
Great job on the short kk! I love the animation and the sleeping dude, haha, he's funny =)
Hurry and score a great job soon, you certainly deserve it :)

LNinja..

[cryzeg]

Ey that's cool. I like the idea a lot. :)

[JRBRAZ]

Congratulations Bartok. Great colors and character design!!! :bounce:

Detonou!!! :thumbsup:

[AkinYaman]

nice snapy things but some watery mouth animation

[ienomis]

oh!!! impressive Job!! i like very much, your modeling, your caracter design, and story its quite funny!!! congratulations

[FaustoDeMartini]

All I can say is: I'm very impressed... it's been a long time since I don't see any work from you, and all of the sudden you come up with something like this. Character design, animation, cameras, lights, everything shows a great level of maturity and quality.

Good luck and keep up the great work!

Fausto.

[BartokDesign]

Big mouth - Thank you for the C&C

YakZSmelk - Thanks , yeah you understood it.

Banshax - Im glad you liked the fantasy of the short.

Ajouz - Hi , thanks for the comments, yeah some ppl didnt like that reflections.

OmarFernandes - Thanks.

Ville - ahah i hope it wasnt after your short , it would be hard to make ppl happy after crying like crazys from hastings.

Zaak - Hey man , thanks for all the animation tips.

X-RaiZen - candy candy candyyyyyy

cryzeg - Cool, Im glad you liked the idea.

JRBRAZ - Valeu, abraco.

AkinYaman - huh... ok

ienomis - Thank you my friend.

FaustoDeMartini - Thanks , your words were very kind and they mean alot for me.

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