perso

[Cole]

looks pretty good, muscles could be a little more defined for such a big guy imo, but overall its looking very good

[EVIL]

i dont think the muscles needs more definition..I like the current look.. it looks alot more relaxt and realisitic. if you would define the muscles more then you would get a very tensed look.

the bellybutton looks a lil wierd. could you post a wirefream of your basic mesh?

[Reo]

great start guy...... I'd say bring out the adams apple a bit more in the throat.......and raise the muscle line between the shoulder and the biscept........


keep it up...and post wires!

Reo

[thjazi]

I don't add more definition on muscles, I 'd like a heavy weight one, a little like Lebanner !!

I'll look for adams apple, sorry but I don't understand "wierd" for the bellybutton (I look)
I have modify shoulder

a link for the wire > 207 ko, max size 30 .....
http://thjazi.free.fr/wire_01.jpg


thanks for replies !!

[CuTnPaste]

cool!!

really good model!!

go ahead!! texture rigging animation :p

cutnpaste

[Sceme]

i don't know, but i like this as it is....i mean...hmm...if it doesn't have to be so realistic...it reminds me of something...something like...Quake theme....heavy guy. Animated...it would be amazing.
Just :thumbsup: :eek:

[thjazi]

thanks for replies !!!

an update with the back,
I modify the neck and the shoulder



http://thjazi.free.fr/corps_02.jpg

[naki]

good news: i think you've done a great job here! very nice muscle structures, and good proportions on the most part.

other news: for some reason, i feel like his shoulders are sagging down... or maybe the muscle in the upper arm/ shoulders needs a little more definition...

[wgreenlee1]

Uh,this is really great stuff here!
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[zurfer]

I think the problem people seem to have with the shoulders could be due to that his biceps seem to be attached incorectly. The top part of the biceps should be attached mor inwards towards the armpit, now it looks like its attached to the middle of the front shoulder instead of the bone.
If I didn´t explain it good enough try cunsulting some anatomy books ore bodybuilding magazines.

Keep the udefined muscles. The only ones that have really defined muscles and still remain huge are bodybuilders just before competition when they have dangerously low fat procentage, and a person can´t survive in that state for more than a couple of days before the dry out.
This is much more realistic.

Keep up th great work

Peter

[thjazi]

thanks for replies !!!

I have modified shoulder, neck, stomach

zurfer I understand, I have changed shoulder, I think (I hope) it's good now thanks

http://thjazi.free.fr/rendu_06_05.jpg

[naki]

i'm not sure what it is, but the lower body looks odd... i know ur still workin' out the details so i won't comment too much. also, i think the heel of the foot is a little too big... makes the foot look kinda short.

what are you using as reference? photo or drawing?

it's comin' along... keep truckin'!

:thumbsup:

[Angelus]

Very good man !
But more details for lower-arm for the muscle.

----------------------
French :
Super !
Par contre met plus de détails sur les avant-bras pour tout ce qui est des muscles. Montre aussi un peu mieux les deltoïdes (muscle derrière le bras si je ne me trompe pas). Pour ce détails, je ne sais pas l'écrire en anglais donc y'a que toi qui l'aura lol

[zurfer]

Thats definetly better.

Keep it up

[thjazi]

you're right naki :buttrock: I have modify the heels, foot too and I have lengthening a little the leg
for reference I use every thing who can help me, book, photo, me for little things ......

pour les avant bras Angelus, j'attends de voir avec les mains ce ke ça donne, merci je vérifierais en tout cas
tu parles des triceps derrière le bras ? les deltoïde sont au niveau des épaules

ok zurfer thanks

hands next week, no time now

http://thjazi.free.fr/rendu_07_05.jpg

thanks for replies :beer:

[thjazi]

an update with modifications

http://thjazi.free.fr/rendu_14_05.jpg

and a link for full version

full version (http://thjazi.free.fr/rendu_14_05_full.jpg)

[dominicqwek]

Cool modeling u got there. you know who he reminds me of? arnold schwarzenegger in terminator..

I like his built, stout and compact(with muscles and all). Could imagine him wielding this super huge cannon. Can we see some wires?

Looking forward to this! :D

[Carina]

It's looking very good!

I like the way he has muscles but they're not like TOO defined!

I agree on the lower body looking a bit weird tho...

I think somehow his thighs are too long, and his calves are too short..

If that makes sense. Anyway, great work so far. I love his face, very nicely modelled.:thumbsup:

[thjazi]

in futur he will had a huge weapon

the wire 217 ko

http://thjazi.free.fr/wire.JPG

thanks for replies :beer:

[Joebount]

Bon, elle update la tafiolle ? :applause:

Allez zou, on continue !!! up up up

[thjazi]

merci Joebount !!! :buttrock:
( pour tes mots doux aussi au passage ;) )

je n'ai pas le temps pour l'instant, d'ici deux petites semaines je pense, dès ke je peux je m'y remets en tout cas !!

++ :beer:

[koroko]

Thats great modelling, and it has style, an slightly and nice fat feeling all over which i like a lot...

Everything´s right for me except the lower leg...from the knee to the ankle...that area could use some smoothing ...


Great job anyway...

are you gonna give him some clothes & characterization?

[thjazi]

for leg perhaps it's camera's angle, but I'll check, thanks koroko

yes I will give him some clothes and stuffs, but not now


http://thjazi.free.fr/lastwip.jpg

[inaktive]

simply beautiful modeling skills here..
i think the muscle structure and anatomy are modeled almost perfectly...

only crit is that he doesn;t have much personality to him..
kinda has that "cold" "non living" look to him... if that makes any sense... other than that though... sick job! can;t wait for the textures

[jdsb]

awesome modeling.
the fingers of the foot look copied and too same,lack variation,might wanna look into that.otherwise awesome modeling job ,vry well done so far.

[thjazi]

thanks for comment jdsb and inaktive
fingers made one by one, but i will look

a new head for my perso

http://thjazi.free.fr/texture_visage_05.jpg

[Valentina]

The hair is very realistic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[reekchaa]

Great Eyes!

Nose tip's a little polished (without detail), but his whole Head is really done Very well.

About his Shins (knee to ankle): Calf muscles bulge out huge while they taper down too thinly, I think, for his build.

[Zapan]

Wow it's so impressive !!

The hair , the skin, eyes all is very realistic GG !!
(His head has a quiet look of Hulk)

Would it be ok to see the wire of his face ?

[OptimusDinkus]

thanks for comment jdsb and inaktive
fingers made one by one, but i will look

a new head for my perso

http://thjazi.free.fr/texture_visage_05.jpgId say the only thing holding this back is that the ears helix (the outer ring) on the inside is domed, its not a fleshy little tube but an intricate dome on the inside. Id fix that for shure

[EVIL]

Good use of polygons.. the loops have an exelent flow

[peaxio]

WOW!! I like this a lot! I'm very very impressed. You are doing a really great job so far. Keep it up! Will be back for anything new...

[evandavies]

Wow, great modelling.

You clearly have a good understanding of musculature.
The head is very well proportioned too.
Textures are great as well.

My only comment would be the ears.

Looks like he would make a great futuristic soldier...

Are we going to see him in an anim? :bounce:

Keep going...
Evan

[thjazi]

Hi,

I'm working on my RooM http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=168864 and my WIP II http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=74942&perpage=15&pagenumber=2 at this time,

So I'll work later on this perso
not anime perhaps some pose
I'll look for the ears, and nose

I'll post the wire of the face later, sorry, I haven't got it here

Thanks !! :thumbsup:

[SUN]

:thumbsup: EEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Fantastic Head man Great ART:thumbsup:


Originally Posted by OptimusDinkus
Id say the only thing holding this back is that the ears
...............................................yep

[GreenBomber]

Nice clean model and very impressive textures, Awesome man!
good job

[Hayven]

The Muscle definition in the arm is on point. Did you use an anatomy book.

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