character: Hero WIP

[betelgeuse]

Wow, really nice modeling. The only nitpicky thing that jumps out at me is that the wrinkles on the shirt sleeve over the deltoid and the forearms don't look convincing.
Really nice job.

[bigB]

the grenade is flying!!!!!:)

and I can't really see the sweater/t-shirt only wrinkles but the end of the sleeves are hard to see

[eddy-3ddy]

more light is welcome:D

and when that's done. I miss something on his head. Like a "rambo" thing or a helmet. THat would be cool

give the head a more boxier shape. like those seals and so on always have.:applause:

very cool model

[Cole]

the shirt conforms a little to tightly to the body for the size wrinkles you ahve, i think you should either make the wrinkles smaller or make the shirt a little more loose. and make the sleeve ends more visible, otherwise the modelling is very good

[reaver]

Thanks for the comments,

All good points. I'll get round to updating him and re-post.

O/T: wooohoooooo

My Jeep (YJ) is just being delivered :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: I've just had a AMC 360 V8 stuffed into her she sounds awesome.

I need to take her for a spin


C'ya.

Nick.

[EVIL]

give him some armor some hair and a helmet and he looks exactly like our hero in id's DOOM

[RKanyama]

Good job man!
Lets see the wireframe
:bounce:

[Maximus Groff]

:bounce: wow! ready to go!

;) wheres the machine guns ?

very good.. man.. :wip:

[reaver]

Here's a quick update,

I'll give him some head gear tomorrow.

Let me know what you think.

Ciao.

Nick.

http://www.imagedesign.org.uk/hero7.jpg

http://www.imagedesign.org.uk/scrn_cap2.jpg

[leigh]

That's nice modelling, but I don't like the wrinkles on the forearms - they look very unconvincing.
Oh, another thing that looks strange are those 3 little thingies on the top of the strap around his torso, just above all the ammo. What are those? Little containers? They look too perfect in their shape.
Otherwise, it's a cool piece of work :thumbsup:

[reaver]

Thanks Leigh,

Your opinion is always appreiciated.

Yeah I'm not too pleased with arm wrinkles at the moment, I'll move them around a bit and give them more life.
As for the 3 "thingies":) they're meant to be gun magazine pouches I was going to bang them up with bump maps and stick a couple of bones in them to give them more movement, but as you're the second person to mention them, well what the public wants the public gets;)

I'll post some updates asap.

Cheers.

Nick.

PS keep the crits coming, and any suggestions about what to put on his head would be appreiciated.

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