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Dean[hawk]

04-24-2003, 10:33 PM

Hi...i am new to these forums, i am 15yrs old and also fairly new to 3d (i've been learning it for about a year) i am 110% committed to learning 3D...it is basically my life:)

This was my very first piece of (what i think is good) abstract art made in bryce 5. I know most of you think that abstract art is a waste of time because it takes very little time to produce. Well, i think people that think this are wrong. It takes lots and lots of practise to get the textures, lighting and camera angle to look right....

Anyway here it is and please give me your honest opinion.:thumbsup: :thumbsdow

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Click here for abstract image (http://overload4.netfirms.com/abstract.jpg)

Thanks
Dean

Dean[hawk]

04-24-2003, 11:01 PM

ok guys the link above^^^will work now:buttrock:

stephen2002

04-24-2003, 11:12 PM

that is cool. However the composition sees off, the bottom is much heavier and more intricate than the top. I know that is so you would have room for the logo but it just dosn't seem to fit very nicely. Most of the shapes and patterns are fairly simetrical but the overall image is not.

Nice work overall!

Dean[hawk]

04-24-2003, 11:19 PM

thnx:) i'm glad you were honest!:beer:

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