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MichelBosma
01-08-2008, 08:33 AM
This is my first real CG movie. And i would like some comments on what i made. It's an F-16 fighter jet flying through old Amsterdam. I hope you guys like it.

http://s4.video.blip.tv/1500002166168/Michelbosma-PreVis10676.mp4

mistasam02
01-08-2008, 06:50 PM
Can't get the link to work :sad:

MichelBosma
01-08-2008, 07:42 PM
Can't get the link to work :sad:
Sorry for that, i have updated the link. It should work now.

MichelBosma
01-08-2008, 07:48 PM
Can't get the link to work :sad:
Sorry for that, i have editted the link, it should work now.

KyleG
01-08-2008, 07:57 PM
the main thing i noticed is that the glass isn't broken after the pieces fall, it just seems like glass particles are being emitted from unbroken glass. You definitely want to be able to tell the glass has been broken and see jagged pieces on the windows after the jet has passed. The pieces of glass also seem to be very uniform in size, I would play with this a little.

mistasam02
01-08-2008, 08:55 PM
Yea, the glass is too white, in my opinion. Also the exhaust/heat blur looks too much like a trail behind the jet. I'd tone it's opacity down to make it a little more subtle. Good job on the jet, though! Cool project!

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