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X-RaiZen
01-02-2008, 03:41 AM
Hi everyone! :)

This is my short film created during the course of Digital Character Animation at VFS 07,
the story is about a little angel who lost his fig leaf and got locked out of the pearly gates.

Download:
hiRez (45mb) ~ http://dsari.com/files/dewisari_notforgotten_hirez.mp4
loRez (11mb) ~ http://dsari.com/files/dewisari_notforgotten_lorez.mp4

Youtube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5U-CnOs4dWw
site: http://dsari.com/nf.htm

Comments and critiques are more than welcome, thank you for taking your time and i hope you like it :)

http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/hh4/X-RaiZen/DewiSari_NotForgotten.jpg

Loukor
01-02-2008, 04:00 AM
Great job on creating such a cute style, and considering that DCA is only 6 months... thats a great deal of work you have there. Grats

sgbox
01-02-2008, 06:01 AM
funny animation. good work man.

KSteineman
01-02-2008, 08:00 AM
Dewi! I'm glad I'm finally given the privilege to view your film, you had a really good sense of color from the start, and I really enjoyed the little twist with "God" lifting him up as he's trying so desperately to get over the fence. Great job!

samsonwong
01-02-2008, 08:13 AM
Great work here!! I enjoy all the shots in your animation. It's a great piece and yes, i agree with above, you have good sense of color. Very nice!!! Keep it up!~

Ville
01-02-2008, 08:51 PM
Hey Dewi, amazing work!

This came out really great! Considering how much time you've got, how much effort, dedication you've put in, how fast and how much you can learn, on top of being organized and a great person, anyone that hires you will be very happy!
Congrats, and good luck! 5 *!

electronicpulse
01-02-2008, 09:33 PM
Yeah, good job, i love you're short film, all through the program you demonstrated great commitment and love for what you were doing, and it really shows...
you're gonna do very very good dear.
two thumbs up!

BrandonDude
01-02-2008, 11:00 PM
lovely story with this cute character . love it love it love it.:thumbsup:

X-RaiZen
01-02-2008, 11:46 PM
Loukor - Thank you!

sgbox - Thanks! I'm female by the way, haha

KSteineman - wow! I'm honored! Thank you so much, and that's my favourite scene too:)

samsonwong - Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Ville - Danny! your comments makes me all teary *hugs, coudnt finish this short film without you! and hey, congrats on the 3dtotal frontpage!

electronicpulse - Thank you!! it sure was fun being the same class with you!

BrandonDude - Thanks! I'm glad you like it

Zaak
01-03-2008, 06:54 PM
Excellent stuff for the time given,and I was really impressed at your hard work and dedication.You will go places ..Lninja..

Nomowu
01-04-2008, 04:01 AM
nice animation! I like the render and the storytelling.

diginime
01-04-2008, 04:35 AM
good job, i like your character design. Good luck!

X-RaiZen
01-04-2008, 05:31 PM
Mr.Zack - waah, you make me so happy :love:Thank you so much Zack for believing in me, you know how much you taught me! Lets meet again at a studio someplace, somewhere around the world :)

Nomowu - Thank you! I'm glad you like the animation and hey, i like your animation with the little cute rat!

diginime - Thanks! Good luck to you too :)

MayaDamien
01-04-2008, 08:05 PM
hey , great to see how it finally turned out .. i guess its not a moogle afterall. really nice warm colours and facial expressions! ( especially the eyes, some parts reminded me of pikachu, google pikachu ketchup and maybe you will understand what im talking about hehe)

really awesome + cute overall , dca kicks so much ass ;)
5*
see you guys at your grad
/D

X-RaiZen
01-05-2008, 05:28 PM
Hey Damien! Thank you! thanks for watching too :) yeah, its not a moogle unfortunately, hehe..people keep saying that the character's a different being (moogle..pig..potato..fat) o_o its funny..and i found a picture of pikachu ketchup, hahaha, its so cute!! makes you feel like squishing it's cheeks! yeah...dca rocks :) 3d rocks too, hehe, see you at grad!

oh, by the way, i havent got the chance to say it, but your works are awesome O_O *bug eyed

KalaisOkudama
01-07-2008, 08:19 AM
very nice short!

funny story and graphic style is cute ^_^

Eyes of angel reminds me anime/manga style



P.S. I am courious, u made eyes using only textures?

X-RaiZen
01-07-2008, 07:13 PM
Hi Kalais, thank you for the compliment! Poa's eyes are not texture based animated, they are actually objects in which I animate using set driven keys (on the visibility). The style I go for is Pocoyo :) Check them out when you have some time.

OmarFernandes
01-07-2008, 08:38 PM
well is something you just got to like it :D keep it up

lime324
01-20-2008, 04:26 AM
Nicely done!! Appealing character, very cute and funny. Great lighting and color! Such a simple story yet made us smile.. :). Animation could have a little bit touch up, but this is good enough. Overall it's very good! straight ace.. 5*! :thumbsup:

Keep it up!
Cheers!

ps: kalo liat dari namanya kayanya anak Indo nih, bener gak?? :D

BartokDesign
01-20-2008, 02:41 PM
:thumbsup: great work Dewi, everybody just love it when I show your short for them.

Jermination
01-20-2008, 03:19 PM
hah nice work, i like the animation / story.
the rendering was really suitable aswell!

good job

X-RaiZen
01-21-2008, 07:02 AM
OmarFernandes - thank you! i'm glad you like it =) and whoa man..your lighting's really good!:thumbsup:

lime324 - Wow, thanks! and yes, i'm from indonesia too! nice to meet you :)

kk - haha, thank you kk! miss you loads!

Jermination - thanks! i just saw your short! i really like the visual style :buttrock:its cool! make more with that awesome style =)

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