iadagraca
12-25-2007, 12:51 AM
I've been working on this story practically since i was 8(i'm 16 now). its gone through a whole lot of changes and its finally matured in to what i think is an awesome idea but i want to know other peoples opinions before i start working fully on the story. i plan on using this as a base for my next several paintings and renders, since when i was a kid the thought of a story was my insiration to draw all the time everyday. so all i ask is that your read it and tell me if its works, or if there are any drastic problems. its still not 100% complete but i'd say its like 95% done :P.
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The story takes place in deep future in the usa. at this time energy isn't a problem and the outer environments are almost uninhabitable due to the whole global warming thing. but thats not the only reason, over 200years before, an explorer found a new natural resource. After risking his life to get it and almost killed he found out that this one piece of this material(which will remain unnamed for a while) thats the size of a basket ball can power the entire country for thousands of years.
but what they didn't know was that life was supported through the material too. so through the time the world used this material for power the outer world dwindled resulting in most sections being put under oxygen domes.
meanwhile the animals that where left out side those domes where slowly mutated getting smarter and stronger over generations. the animals knew what was causing this to happen from the start but never thought to do anything about it until now. they believed that returning the material to the environment would restore it. so they planned to take it back.
using their new found intelligence they broke through to the dome where the material was held. killing anyone that got in their way and any obstacle, they made it to the core where the material was held to generate energy from.
the animals and creatures had a low understanding of human technology. they had no idea what could happen if the material was removed. from the moment that the material was taken a meltdown of almost every thing it was connected to began.
anything that received energy from the material not only shutdown but some even exploded. military missiles where launched and landed on nearby countries or even on our own land. the total damage of that alone was more than anything ever experienced on the earth.
so not only were the oxygen domes protecting the people from the toxic air destroyed but the missiles and other things added on to it. this resulted in death from the radiation or mutation, some people even became mixed up with nearby animals.
the area least effected was the south west of USA, because they were so far from the material hold(it was in new york). the numerous meltdowns wore off as the energy shock weakened. this area had minimal mutations so the majority of the people remained human.
hoping to remain human they migrated south casting away any one that was not mostly human in looks. the people left behind were mutated, most of them where mixed with animals in some way. the unmutated humans called them sins.
the people who where mutated were devastated. not only because of how they looked, but because of what they believed in, what they lost, and the pain in their bodies. people with out anymore will committed suicide, while others where angry at the humans for leaving them and the names they call them. those people wanted revenge, but surviving was first. the radiation seemed to no longer have any more effect, and the only thing for food were the dead bodies and radiated fruits...
i'll leave it at that for now, i'll put up the story later...
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The story takes place in deep future in the usa. at this time energy isn't a problem and the outer environments are almost uninhabitable due to the whole global warming thing. but thats not the only reason, over 200years before, an explorer found a new natural resource. After risking his life to get it and almost killed he found out that this one piece of this material(which will remain unnamed for a while) thats the size of a basket ball can power the entire country for thousands of years.
but what they didn't know was that life was supported through the material too. so through the time the world used this material for power the outer world dwindled resulting in most sections being put under oxygen domes.
meanwhile the animals that where left out side those domes where slowly mutated getting smarter and stronger over generations. the animals knew what was causing this to happen from the start but never thought to do anything about it until now. they believed that returning the material to the environment would restore it. so they planned to take it back.
using their new found intelligence they broke through to the dome where the material was held. killing anyone that got in their way and any obstacle, they made it to the core where the material was held to generate energy from.
the animals and creatures had a low understanding of human technology. they had no idea what could happen if the material was removed. from the moment that the material was taken a meltdown of almost every thing it was connected to began.
anything that received energy from the material not only shutdown but some even exploded. military missiles where launched and landed on nearby countries or even on our own land. the total damage of that alone was more than anything ever experienced on the earth.
so not only were the oxygen domes protecting the people from the toxic air destroyed but the missiles and other things added on to it. this resulted in death from the radiation or mutation, some people even became mixed up with nearby animals.
the area least effected was the south west of USA, because they were so far from the material hold(it was in new york). the numerous meltdowns wore off as the energy shock weakened. this area had minimal mutations so the majority of the people remained human.
hoping to remain human they migrated south casting away any one that was not mostly human in looks. the people left behind were mutated, most of them where mixed with animals in some way. the unmutated humans called them sins.
the people who where mutated were devastated. not only because of how they looked, but because of what they believed in, what they lost, and the pain in their bodies. people with out anymore will committed suicide, while others where angry at the humans for leaving them and the names they call them. those people wanted revenge, but surviving was first. the radiation seemed to no longer have any more effect, and the only thing for food were the dead bodies and radiated fruits...
i'll leave it at that for now, i'll put up the story later...