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freestyluz
12-23-2007, 03:47 AM
An early merry christmas greetings to all!
This is my first short animation about a sleepy butcher and his beloved puppy, Fifi. Comments and critiques are welcome. Thanks for your time!


http://blip.tv/file/get/Freestyluz-FleshMeat730.mov
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http://youtube.com/watch?v=DKd41ay6pOo
http://blip.tv/file/554678
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maxon
12-23-2007, 05:30 PM
It must have been a long project to get this done, I'm sure.

I find the butcher's working environment very enjoyable in conceptual sense. To me it's very original and good looking prop. But sure there would be a lot to work on in terms of lighting and materials.

And there are some nice moments in the directing also.

I hope we'll see something new from you in the future as well :)


mj
freestyluz
12-24-2007, 04:32 AM
Hi Maxon,


I agree with what you said about the lighting, I find it abit of challenge to differentiate when he was having a nightmare from where he is in reality. I actually tried dimming the lights abit and give the light a blueish hue when he was having a nightmare. I still got alot to learn in terms of cinematography too I guess. Thanks for the comments.

George
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