[3d still] WIP - evening shoot

[eokorie]

Cool image! That is a nice pic.... :bounce:

[malc0lm]

Looking good, but theres something fishy about the lightning. Seems to be a bright light on the floor. This ruins the mood set by the picture that is the "outdoors", IMHO. Would be much cooler if the picuter illuminated the scene or a darkblue, moody, light light the scene..

Great work other then my whine :)

[dandavis]

Looks good so far, I agree about the light to a certain extent. It could be a little more dramatic, but still, looks pretty good IMO. I like the POV and the scene outside the window really works. dano

[AdamT]

I like the mood and lighting, but the arrangement of items looks off. Why is that chair sitting by itself in the middle of the room? Maybe if it's going to be surrealistic it should be more surrealistic, or if it's going to be realistic.... give it more of a sensible arrangement.

[JIII]

Very nice looking. I like the way it looks personally it looks just perfect. I am wondering about one thing though, what are the childrens toys doing there?

[Claudio72]

thank's for the comments..............

the position of the stuff in the room want to be surrealistic.......I will try to give more surrealism........

I've not completely understood the light issue.......
could you please explain me better malc0lm


thank's in advance
claudio

[miketche]

I like the whole atmosphere of the piece. Very cool. The children's blocks/toys do throw it off a bit.

[xeno]

Atmosphere is good, but the floor seems a bit too reflective, even though the wood has a finish (dont know how else to put it

[flingster]

very cool...once again.
i think you need to feel there is a glass window with fittings/mountings...will make it more real looking...but not sure thats where you are going...love the floor texture it rocks. the shelf items particularly bottom shelf seem a little big...or maybe its the shelf width dunno...draws your eye to much away from essentially chair area. other than that and they are minor c+c's i thinks its just to cool...very atmospheric ... nice work bud...:thumbsup:

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