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[Per-Anders]

heh cute! nice model, though maybe it might be nice to give him a bit of a tummy. or a puffed up chest. just to add detail to the main body section and get that seciton more in keeping with the style o the rest of him.

[That Adrian Guy]

Love the eyes! The feet could use definition

You ain't no n00b

[AdamT]

Very cute! It reminds me of the chipmunks--Alvin and the gang. I agree with the comments about the feed and midsection.

[ThirdEye]

Originally posted by AdamT
Very cute! It reminds me of the chipmunks--Alvin and the gang. I agree with the comments about the feed and midsection.

With a pair of glasses it could be Simon :p

[glorydays]

Hey guys, thanks for all the great replys, i do plan on making changes to the overall body. He kinda does look like a chip munk hehehh. here is a concept sketch of him. As you can see i have a lot of fixing to do to him. I might even try remodeling him.

[addicted2_3D]

Cool stuff. It kind of resembles a taller version of screwy squirrel.

[glorydays]

just tried playing with bones and rigging. I know i gotta give him an extra eye but i wanted to play around with posing him. any comments are welcome.

[AdamT]

Looks good. What application were you using before Cinema?

[glorydays]

AdamT: Thanks, before using cinema i used Form-z and a little bit of Electric image. This is my first attempt at modeling a character in any application. Im using c4d 8.1 and so far really enjoy it.

[AdamT]

Originally posted by glory days
AdamT: Thanks, before using cinema i used Form-z and a little bit of Electric image. This is my first attempt at modeling a character in any application. Im using c4d 8.1 and so far really enjoy it.
Well that's really an amazing job for your first character! Glad you're liking Cinema--it's a great program.

[flingster]

nice work bud...
imho i think the hip part needs to be more smoother join...eg top of leg to body...smooth out a little...other than that..v cool.
especially for your first stuff.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[sebek27]

great character ! how did you model him ? box or poly ?

[glorydays]

Flingster: i agree with the hip and im gonna fix it.

Sebek27: this is box modeling and hypernurbs.

[KINGOFPAIN]

:thumbsup:

[glorydays]

just a lil update. In the process of rebuilding the body.

[JIII]

are you sure you are a newbie?

cause man that doesnt look like a newbies work.

nice anyway.

[glorydays]

oh yeah, im brand new to c4d
By the way posemixer and mocca are really great

[Emberghost]

wow that head has some great definition. I cant beleive this is your first model....I feel more noobish now lol. Those eyes look excellent by the way.

[sanciok]

Nice model! a very expressive one.
I think u need to work more on the body legs and feet. Face and Hands are really good!

[mimo8]

perhaps u could post some pictures that are a little bigger.
the face looks really quite expressive and really not like a newcomers work.

but for the body, especially the chest and stomage, it´s impossible to tell if they work or not

I´m looking foreward to some cartoonish espressions:
laughing, cream, angry :thumbsup:

[glorydays]

heres a link to a lil bit bigger of a picture of the face. Im currently reworking his body and feet but I plan on bridging the original hands to the new body. I cant wait to move forward to creating the morph targets. Thanks for all the great comments

bigger face picture (http://www.renderosity.com/gallery.ez?ByArtist=Yes&Artist=glorydays)

[That Adrian Guy]

I love this!

it is sooo rare that people actually know what they're doing when they make something with a cartoon style! Many times it's a n00b excuse to totally disregard proportions and detail, but you are doing a fantastic job!

No crits, keep it up! (love the avatar)

[jasper ontwerpt]

Nice character but I think it needs more definition in the feet. I also think you need to extend the neck a little and last but not least smaller wrists. But a nice character indeed :thumbsup:

[danb]

this is looking great. i agree with what everyone has said. i was just wondering if you could possibly post a pic of the wireframe. i am intrigued as to what the mesh looks like.:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[glorydays]

Hey thanks for the replys. been busy lately so i havent worked on this guy in a while. Think i might start working on him again. Hope this helps danb


http://www.photohost.org/gallery/data/500/2334wire1.jpg

http://www.photohost.org/gallery/data/500/2334render.jpg

[ThirdEye]

He's indeed really cute, can we see an unsmoothed wireframe please? :)

[glorydays]

Here ya go, hope this works. Still need to clean up the mesh a little

http://www.photohost.org/gallery/data/500/2334Wireruff.jpg

[Nhova]

He is indeed very cute :)

Well done.

[glorydays]

Hi guys! been gone for a while but wanted to show you were i'm at on my short film titled "Glory Days". It is really taking forever because im making it in my spare time. please let me know what ya think. thanks

:: ZACH ::


http://www.yourimagehost.com/is.php?i=661&img=face.jpg

[glorydays]

the picture above is my main character. I decided to take a break on him for a lil bit and started modeling the "villian" hehhehe. here is the progress in that
http://www.yourimagehost.com/is.php?i=659&img=beast.jpg

[glorydays]

and finally for now here is a concept wip sketch of maybe a future poster for the short including these two main characters.

thanks again,

:: ZACH ::

http://www.yourimagehost.com/is.php?i=660&img=concept.jpg

[glorydays]

a lil update thanks

:: ZACH ::




http://www.yourimagehost.com/is.php?i=759&img=face2.jpg

[flingster]

this is looking good like the concept sketch...:thumbsup:
keep em coming...

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