sketch dump(4pics)

[jose]

heres another one of the ned kelly drawing!
that thing coming out of his torso is beer! which powers his arm and body...its a side view showing is exposed mecha part to refill fo mo beer :)

http://home.iprimus.com.au/rowlop/pics/nedkelly1.jpg

[dim5um]

oh i really like your first pic....i dunno why...i just love it....maybe because its in blue.....oh your style seems very interesting
oh and do you have a fetish for mechanical parts....lol anyway....i like this first one......you might wanna ink it??

[Sangotten]

Nice!

I think your work has potential but it has some problems: 1, It seems to be chaotis due to the use or lack of use of arcering/shadow stripes. This gives the line work a messy feeling... 2. There is not much dept in it, the concept is cool but the picture seem really flat.
I hope you don't mind me saying this all?

Keep it coming!!

[_a_]

Yep, i'd have to agree with sangotten, you need to put more depth and shading onto them. They seem way too flat. Also take a look at your proportions, arms to legs to torso etc. I love the idea! No wonder the old bushmen gave him such a rap! I'd love to see some colour in these too.
Great stuff, I like it.:thumbsup:

[sabaman]

all i can say is, work on the poses, i see alot of dislocated body parts, nice concepts though,...

[jose]

THANKS guys for the feedback!

Yeah..some people has said that i need to add more depth/colour and i currently trying to find my cging style thats easy and fast, as u can see on the first monster pic i did a little dodge and burn tek...and i need to get my hands on a wacom tablet :) ...and yep i ll work on the poses!

thanks again!

heres another pick of ned:

http://home.iprimus.com.au/rowlop/pics/nedkelly2.jpg

[staglider2]

some basic shadings

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