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[LordShaitan]

Hmm, looks like the idea is there, but you cant really see the face of either character and i think thats where this looses it. Maybe it needs a close up of them both, say the guy just leaning over her shoulder with a nice big smile and she looks scared as all hell.

From what i can see of the model of the woman looks like its perfect. i cant say much for the rest of the comp because of the lighting.

Looks good though

[EvilBasterd]

hmmz... freaky. Why does the word "Hell raiser" comes up in my mind ;)

Great picture :)

[Angelus26]

Looks good, lighting is the main issue if what... Death touching your shoulder? Is that a shamanic reference by chance?

[wgreenlee1]

Need to work more on lighting....

[JonC]

I would really see some volumetric light, I think it would gives some more dimension in your picture.
but still good job, I wont say that I am fan from those kind of pictures, but it is realy well done.:)

[oxhido]

hi people

first of all thanks for your feedback...

-LordShaitan: One of the angles I proved is the one you mention, but the thing was that it changes the atmosphere of the image, introduccing a truculence that I wasn´t looking for.

-Angelus26: Well, the image has an explication. The boy is the death and the roots or veins are the way the death show herself: ilness, accidents...The girl represents everyone of us. She is in a submission position because the death is something inevitable. She is back to death and her eyes has a bandage because she can´t know when death happens. The windows are the journey to the sky, the lights are the hell. The phrase, at least intencionally, has not relation with chamanism. Tell me...

ivan.oxhido

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