falling down

[AlexanderH]

that my friend is one great animation. One thing I may comment on is the wing flapping speed. I find this to be a little slow especially considering the distance/speed of travel. The lead in also seemed a little slow, the run looked more like a quick stroll.I'd suggest shorten the stride or speed up the stride to enhance that a bit.
Overall it looks very good and has a great consitency to it. Great work.

[Munumunup]

I agree with Alex. This looks good.

For my part I would suggest that the pose in which he looks at his featherless arms needs some work. The first time I saw it I wondered where his right arm was. To have it showing would make for a better silhouette I think.
And the pose seems odd with the guy's pelvis twisted away from us, while his head is twisted all the way around in the other direction.
Also its funny that the remainder of the wing dissolves into nothing, with no more feathers visibly fallling off.

I'm being picky. The animation as a whole is a niice piece of work!!.

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