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sandeeprtk 12-16-2007, 01:07 PM hi all,
m posting my WIP here to get ur comments and suggesions.......please give a luk to it.....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S3IL-tB11wM
cheers :)
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Halford
12-16-2007, 03:33 PM
Nice job! I like the mood, and the flying flowers touch.
I personaly don't like the front shoot after he gets hit by the flowers, I cannot really tell you why as I do not know myself, but something is bothering me.
The end is sweet, personally I would make him walk to a more correct direction and make it turn when he looks back...but that's just a matter of taste I guess...
Keep it up, I want to see it fully rendered ;)
Hal.
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