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http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/9660/lowresbarnto3.jpg
Something i did combining two speedmodeling projects i did for a contest. This is my first test concentrating on mood and lighting.
All critiques welcomed!!
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Matroskin
12-18-2007, 03:01 AM
I strongly reccomend that u add blue lights there. Otherwise there is no connection between objects and environment.
Also the impact of a fall (probably from high above with huge speed) is not there yet. E.g. make larger hole in the roof, pressed hay, more disorder around the cube etc.
Havent have any big response so i felt this piece was lacking something. Drama and mood, so i put some elements in to liven up the scene. Be fore warned this piece is far from finished and im still working on it. Here's what i have so far though.
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/350/barnsampok0.jpg
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/2872/barnsamp1bo3.jpg
here's the final piece. I believe ill call it quits for now. All critiques welcome.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/2121/alienspicuf5.jpg
Silghty color enhanced version.
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/2539/alienspic1sz8.jpg
TryForce
06-17-2008, 06:01 AM
The outlay is great, but the resolution and quality of the textures in this scale still have my thoughts. Maybe dirty your hands again and scale up the textures and refine them. :arteest:
Or change the scale of this pic. It's just a crit if you want to archive alot attention to this pic, not if you wanted to do it for urself for fun ;) :bounce:
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