The ROOM...the only ONE...

[Pentagramma]

Hello Raul,

It looks great so far! :)

Great choice of colors - maybe you could make the lava lamp a little more orange (for greater contrast with the shadows). Or maybe you could add a glow to it.

Anyway, it´s very nice. What software are you using?

Good luck!

[Raul-Reznek]

THX for the reply

I'm using max.
The rendering was done with Vray, it looked better with scanline render but the thing was that the LAVALAMP shadow wasn't transparet and I wanted a photorealistic image as possible.

I can't add glow to the lamp cause the Vray engine doesn't allow it.

Do u know how to make SOFTER shadows with Vray?

[Gilgamesh]

The computer area looks kind of dark if it is going to be the center of attention. Dark is ok, but with the shadow cast on the monitor half of it dissapears. For the glow of the lava lamp you could add it in photoshop. Looking good.

[tuna]

has a lovly pixar kind of feel to the lighting :)

i agree, the lava lamp should actually be a stronger less transparent look.
howbout rendering the scene with the monitor turned on? it will brighten up that half of the room much more.

[Raul-Reznek]

OOOOPPPS!!!! Forgot to SAY all of the concept.


U see as the kid shands in front of the P.C. I'm gonna put a rectangular spot light coming from the screen towads his face and that should put him in the middle of attention.

What screen texture do u suggest???? :p :D
I'ce got a pretty good idea....:D

[zandernice]

hehe, this room looks exactly like one that I modeled about a year and a half ago.

[Raul-Reznek]

zandernice, I'd LOVE too see it.

REALLY!!! :bounce:

[robin]

good idea ... i never though about doing something similar ...

i had to post here !!! good job !!!

[railsldr]

oh dear god look at the size of the CPU, it dwarfs the monitor, Other than that it is great. The wallpaper reminds me of Toy Story for some reason.:confused: I wonder why??

[Raul-Reznek]

Thx Robin!

railsldr, I made the P.c. that big on purpose, I wanted to show how some kids have exaggetared powerful computers for their small needs.

I've never seen Toy Story.

[toce]

Hey Raul!

That a really good begining...
It's seems like you need some antialiasing, and there s something strange with the whites parts down the wall... Do you have an ambient light? or ambient color in your material?

[Raul-Reznek]

Heya Toce!

Good to hear from ya, I sent u a mai the day b4.

Are u refering to the material of the wall, THE STARS, or are u refering to the LOWER part of the walls?

I guess you're right, antialiasing, I need to render again.

[toce]

I'm talking about the lower part of the wall...

oh yeah, I got your mail... Just have to find some time to answer :)

[Raul-Reznek]

Thx for all your advice Toce and OTHERS.

This scene has to be complete by tomorrow ( monday) which is ALMOST impossible. Anyways, that's life...:annoyed:

[Risibility]

The blanket/carpet near the bed. Whichever it is, it shouldnt be getting that much cast shadow...its like you have a light on the floor or something. Make it shorter :P. Also the computer's tower should be longer. Its width is almost same as length...Push it closer to the wall too or change camera angle so we can see the monitor better...


:wip:
:rolleyes:

[stephen2002]

the monitor seems to have an awful sharp curve in it.

Other than that, looks good to me.

[Raul-Reznek]

http://www.the3dstudio.com/forum/uploaded/reznek/final.jpg


THIS is probably the final ver. as the deadline as I said b4 is tomorrow(monday)

I couldn't do all the stuff u guys u said cause i was pretty far from the final resault and I had to finish it.

THIS is now my personal record, a character, a scene and ...something else done in 3 days.


Later dudes. SORRY for the poor quality of the image but time was pressing me.

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