Industrial, Petra Richli (3D)

[Silverwing]

That looks great!
I like this old tecnical look!
Good work, putting the passes
together. I really likr your
work. Thumbs up!

[thundering1]

I'm a huge fan of old worn environments, and this is fantastic! The modeling and texturing is wonderful, and the lighting gives it a great "stumbled upon" feel - excellent job!

[Neox3d]

insane textures man, 4 stars

[Chikito]

I like the shaders, very good job : 4* :)

[TomMannington]

I agree, the textures are amazing and the piece has a great atmosphere.

[Daffydd]

I, too, am a fan of worn and torn industry pieces/scenes - and this is great stuff! Nice work!

Daf

[Testament]

Hey Petra,

Nice to see your work here, nice job!! :)

Looking forward to your next piece. :)

[SinP]

Great textures!!!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
I like it so much!!

[emba]

Thanks for all the kind words, guys.

Here the small animation for this scene, showing the different render passes.

Quicktime 625 x 468, 3.6 MB (http://www.petrarichli.com/download/industrial625.mov)
Windows Media Player 625 x 468, 5.5 MB (http://www.petrarichli.com/download/industrial625.wmv)

And here some Texture examples:
Front_colo.jpg (http://www.petrarichli.com/download/cg/Front_colo.jpg), original size was 2048 x 2048
RoundCentre_colo.jpg (http://www.petrarichli.com/download/cg/RoundCentre_colo.jpg), original size was 2048 x 2048
Screws_colo.jpg (http://www.petrarichli.com/download/cg/Screws_colo.jpg)

[methodz]

agreed these textures are really great good job man... great atmosphere

[That-JC]

I also appreciate the texturing (and modeling) very much. But also, the composition is excellent, with the lighting and shadowing strengthening it. A nice smooth balance of design principles and a gracious feel.

Would like to suggest improvements, but can't spot anything to improve - well maybe a bit stronger center-of-interest to give the eye somewhere to rest a bit.

[rubenmontecinos]

Really great. I like your image very much!

[cenkkara]

very good texturing! :thumbsup:

[emba]

Thanks again for all the positive comments! I really appriciate it.

That-JC: i totaly agree on your center-of-interest comment. I might just add some more small details on the round thing, i thought about a sign hanging down.

[caro]

hey Petra!

Nice to see the picture here. As mentioned before attention to details, lighting, and textures are top quality. I also love the color palette here, works so well... can't wait your next picture!

:bounce:

[JGW]

nice texture and the shadow, man.

[bendal]

hey Petra,

I'm really glad you showed this piece over here. This is the best version yet. I also agree with most of the comments about the texturing and lighting. You are really good at making things look dirty and old and rusted.

Talk to you later,

Fer

[suggg]

This is a nice picture! This looks like an old tired place. When I looked at this image, I was instantly reminded of images by Oscar Chiconi. The mood/lighting/texture gives it that feel. Really good stuff!!! .....Gus

[prabodha]

:bounce: love ur textur's mann 4 stars..

[vanda]

Nice feeling...amazing textures and atmosphere:thumbsup:

[Ismail]

Five stars! :) Very inspiring!:)

[vijjuworld]

nice work dude :-) specilly textures and lighting is good.. that textures have u taken anywhere or u painted ???

[emba]

vijjuworld, most of the textures started out with some images from cgtextures.com, but they are all totaly changed and layered over each other multiple time. all the scratches, highlights and many details are handpainted. the psd files are huge! thank god, i've bought a new computer:-)

thanks again for the great comments.

[gary-smith]

Impressive work, the textures are brilliant! A little work on the rendering/lighting and it would look extremely photorealistic, but it's still great otherwise. Very artistic, keep it up! =)

[emba]

Xeron3d: thanks for your response. could you tell me on what exactly you would work more to make it more photorealistic?

[thomaspringle]

Great work Petra!

Only thing I can think of in terms of critique is the general focus point as I believe someone mentioned. Iif you add a couple of highlights on the big turning knob on the right I think it would give the viewer an improved point of focus.

But really great work! I love this one.

Take care, and see you in January!
T.

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