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Kuba1 04-21-2003, 05:00 AM I hope this one finally works. Critiques please.
Animation (http://www.kubatica.com/1.mov)
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as i dont have a very indepth knowledge of animation....i cant really give good comments :\ but this in genral is a great looking piece...and a pretty funny story :D keep up the great work....i hope more people get to see this
Sceme
04-21-2003, 09:12 PM
wow...i don't know about animation stuff much either...but this looks good :) guite nice fast snappy moves :)...
William b. Hand
04-21-2003, 09:14 PM
That's GREAT! What are you using for this? Fun character, Spot-On animation, and ridiculous classic story! More, please:bounce:
Kuba1
04-21-2003, 10:15 PM
I used Max to model, light, and animate, and used Combustion for post. Thanks a lot for your response guys.
really nice animation!!
it is very expressive! well done!
what did you do in combustion?
John Lee
04-21-2003, 11:08 PM
just wondering can u post an avi or mpeg . I can't play this mov file???
Thanks
JOhn
Kuba1
04-22-2003, 12:27 AM
Well Jon C in Combustion I color corected both my footage and my matte painting to match and also added blurs to my clip. John Lee I'm working on your problem right now. Thanks guys
Kuba1
04-22-2003, 12:47 AM
ok John Lee this one's for you.
Animation (http://www.kubatica.com/9.avi)
John Lee
04-22-2003, 12:52 AM
WOW very good animation very snapy thats what i like to see and good timing! I love the backgrounds. Good comp very well done
JOhn
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
Kuba1
04-22-2003, 01:01 AM
Thank John. By the way I really like your trailer of your upcoming animation, the robot like character is animated real nicely. I'm looking forward to seeing the final product.
ok :) thx
it gives a really good aspect :) again well done
John Lee
04-22-2003, 01:07 AM
Thanks man i really worked hard on this short for about 7 mouths now and still going for it i will give u a shout once it's finished. There will be some pics soon on this thead
The final race thead (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=57153)
Thanks man
John
hypercube
04-22-2003, 02:05 AM
Great cartoony feel and animation, I like the tugging a lot :thumbsup:
crit-wise, it maybe seems just a touch dark, keep getting distracted by the brighter background. Also you could maybe sell the button push a tiny bit more, it seems awkward, or maybe it's the move leading up to it..could have him jump from farther away or anticipate more or such. Also while he's tugging, some of the mouth shapes seem almost..happy? Some big grit-straining-teeth in the mouth there would be cool :D
Minor points anyway, cool stuff :)
Kuba1
04-22-2003, 05:29 AM
Thanks hypercube. I actually have quite a bit to work on my facial morphs. And since my 10 second clip for school is already submitted I will make it a bit longer and add a little to the story.
Maximus Groff
04-22-2003, 04:19 PM
Oh boy!
This is awesome... how many days on this one ?
Kuba1
04-22-2003, 04:30 PM
I lost track, but I think this whole thing took me about a month and a half, but I had a lot to do from my other clases too, so. The animation part took me about 2 weeks, but I will still be touching it up. Thanks for your reply MG
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