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alexanimator
12-14-2007, 02:45 PM
Hey guys,

Well, i revised the shocked animation. Due to critiques i recieved about there being a ton of poses, but no pauses and also his shock celebration seemed random.

I tried to hold on a few poses when he has the ball in his hands because he was right, it was just going straight through the poses i wanted to hit. I also changed out his celebration as it was random and just looked a bit floaty and unclean. I changed it to a few jumps and a fist pump at the end.

Hopefully the changes satisfy the crits and i'm even closer to completion. Thanks everyone

http://www.hagbros.com/SHOCKED_smooth_2.mov

KyleG
12-15-2007, 04:18 PM
Right now lots of his motions and poses are very straigh and linear, you really should work on your poses and inbetweens to try and get more arch into his movement. Keep up the good work!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/kyleGarrett/curves.jpg

alexanimator
12-15-2007, 05:52 PM
thanks kyle. working on it right after my current one

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