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creativeart
12-13-2007, 03:58 PM
Hello everybody m new to cgsociety.
I'm a fresher and i have tried sum animations please help me improve.

push
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gThk0mCD39Q

Jump
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezXEYd_O3uo

creativeart
12-15-2007, 08:47 AM
nobody to reply???

koots
12-15-2007, 02:50 PM
On the push animation. I really like it for the most part. The part that ruins it for me is the fact that he pushes once and then looks at the camera. I think you should drop the part completly and have him continue to push the Box off of the screen. It is a good start and you did a nice job making the box look heavy.

On the jump animation. I really think this needs work, I am not sure where in the animation I don't like but it looks very flat to me. You need some build up to the jump maybe have him bend down a little more??

KyleG
12-15-2007, 03:59 PM
The main thing is noticed on the jump was the arch he is making through the air is pretty weird, he seems to be jumping out and then coming back towards his starting location, see image, you want a nice clean arch on your jump and I would also play with the timing, make sure he slows down at the top of the arch and then speeds up during the fall.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/kyleGarrett/arch.jpg

creativeart
12-19-2007, 03:58 AM
hey thank u so much i'll make changes n upload it

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