Still: Guitar (yamaha)

[dzogchen]

Pretty good model. But the textures need more work to look good and realistic.

[Pachy]

Well Lobsi .... not bad but the environment is a bit boring.
And the lightning is a bit strange

anyway its nice :applause:

[LoneLobo]

thank you both very much for the comments :love:

pachy, what would you like to see as a "good" environment?

and dzogchen, could you give me some advice to improve the textures? would be very very kind of you :)

[mactabilis]

It seems like some parts are a little too perfect. Other than that I really like it, especially the amp. The lighting looks a little cheesy, as does the sparkely purple backdrop.

[wayfaerer]

A beautiful picture with a nice atmosphere! I'm not completely sure about the strap but otherwise see nothing to crit.

[wgreenlee1]

Is the guitar sitting down on the stand?To me it doesnt look right...
Theres a big black void on the veiwers left of the guitar that needs either some lighting or just move the camera to ignore it.
Looking great though.:thumbsup:

[xLonewolfx]

hey thats pretty cool man

1 thing

the trem handle stands up
take it down (loos it)

:thumbsup:

btw
why yamaha?
make the jem7 =P

[warhead]

I think you left the shadows. But the modelling is good!

Greetz

[xLonewolfx]

http://www.jemsite.com/dl/virtualjem/


check this
u migh find it inspiering :)

(damn i need to buy it soon!)

[LoneLobo]

wow, so many replies, I didn't think i get that much feedback :O

mactabilis, in some case you are right, but at the moment the fact is, that my guitar is nearly 1 month old, so theres very few dirt etc on it. I've already dirtened up the texture, but yes, it's not really noticeable...thank you for your comment, I'll use it for the next thing I'm going to model =)

wgreenlee1, you are right, my max viewport says, it's not exactly standing on it :[

lonewolf, I did the yamaha, because I bought it and real things are great reference material ;)
tremolo could really be looser, actually i don't have the tremolo installed, so i just didn't see on my real guitar whether it falls down or not.

and warhead, there ARE shadows :)
on the floor, useless, hidden because of the wires.
and you can see them on the guitar, shadows from the toplight ;)

everyone else I didn't answer in detail here, many thanks for your comment :love:

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