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markoid
04-20-2003, 11:24 AM
Hello,
I'm a 3dMax newbie.This is my first real scene made in Max and my first finished poly model.Feedback welcome.

http://www.linknet.com.au/markh/2dolphins3.jpg

doh! no sig!![IMG

Obaid3DFX
04-20-2003, 12:10 PM
Nice design ;)

since this is the first complete scene I consider it a big success for you.....

the only critic may be on lighting..need more tweaking

overall I like it.
:applause:

drifter51
04-20-2003, 02:02 PM
nice.

I agree that the lighting needs to be tweaked.
I also think you should change the camera angle, having both subjects so centered makes the composition bland.

markoid
04-20-2003, 11:10 PM
Thanks for the comments and yes I agree - the lighting could be tweaked more.To be honest I tweaked them quite a bit and used a few excludes etc and found the combination with vol light and fog had me going round in circles for quite a while hehe- all part of learning it huh! thanks again.

Sorry moderators - I read the rules 'after' I posted.Will get the subject title right next time.I tried to edit the title but it didn't work

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