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adityaganediwal

12-11-2007, 10:46 AM

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Title: Remebrance...
Name: Aditya Ganediwal
Country: India
Software: Maya, mental ray

i have downloaded this scene file from 3drender.com and i have texture and lighted it.
it's an effort to show the mood and feeling of someone when he/she is really missing his/her loved one's

Bravado

12-11-2007, 10:28 PM

Erm, no offense, dude, but why would you post this if all you did was texture it and put some lights in? That doesn't sound like real work.

Dtox

12-12-2007, 01:38 AM

All other issues aside.
All the geometry needs to be higher rez to smooth it out.
The candles need to look like real candles instead of fake plastic candles with bulbs on top. Use some SSS on them.
The wood of the table needs alot of work, namely a better shader. Looks like a basic phong shader. Oren-Nayer would be better.
The illumination needs ALOT of work!

This would've been better posted in the WIP subforum since it's far from a finished piece.

Keep at it though, you'll get there.

Neox3d

12-12-2007, 05:27 AM

yup agreed, too low res

JGW

12-12-2007, 07:04 AM

make the candle semitransparent will be better

adityaganediwal

12-12-2007, 08:34 AM

Thank You all for guiding me.
I'll make sure dat i wont repeat the same mistakes again and
I'll try to make it more better and more detailed!!

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