Scene: Outpost

[DarkBane]

I think that your picture is pretty cool looking.

Your layout is nice, but there is no real since of depth.

Lighting is going to be a big factor in fixing that, but also maybe play around with your depth of field.

Other than that, looks cool.

Keep up the good work.

[dandavis]

Thanks DarkBane, what if I added some mountains in the background? Would that help with the depth issue? Also, what do you mean when you say it will have lots to do with lighting, could you elaborate?

I appreciate the feedback!

dano

[DarkBane]

What I meant was that picture is very flat looking.

There seems to be no focus on one specific part of the picture.

If you want the characters to stick out, have them lit the way you want it, but then maybe darken the background a little, so that it looks like it's in the background.

I just think it would look better with some more contrast between the foreground and the background.

I can't tell you any specific way to light your scene, but maybe play around and I'm sure you could come up with a really cool looking picture.


Good luck.

[dandavis]

Thanks.

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