Final Pose

[mwkmn]

Can't open the page...

[spacemunky]

it should work now

[Sean Johnston]

Looks great!




I don't know if I could ever find it in me to model a dude's penis though...All my characters until the end of time will hopefully remain action figures ;)

[secretasianman]

oh god eyes burn, no i didn't just see male genitilia.
when u rig him are you going to make him asthetically correct?
just kidding.
looks good, good detail, but the crotch is to much, imo.
if you go for modelling to do stuff and it's needed then yea put it in, but in most cases it's kinda not.
when you are modelling you have to ask yourself, am i doing this for games or movies?
if it is games you over did it.
if it's movies you are on a good track especially with attention to detail.

[secretasianman]

oh i for got what i think are problems.
i have little problem with fingers and toes.
parts of his hands are to small or underdeveloped.
fix the big toe, feet are a little flat and to curved in middle area.
lower leg, there is an annoying line running down the middle.
work a little on the top legs.

[spacemunky]

i only gave him his package after i got alot of complaints prior about him being incomplete without it. I wish people would make up their minds:applause:

[Guruabyss]

Why is it 10 year old's come to this post and are posting crap like the following:
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I don't know if I could ever find it in me to model a dude's penis though...All my characters until the end of time will hopefully remain action figures

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It takes a real man to put every detail into a model. If you told your lifedrawing teacher that you didn't want to draw a male nude model because you would have to draw his junk, you would be out of the class. Lets grow up eh?

But yes the big toe is a little bit too big. Just use your own foot as an example. But over all GREAT JOB!!!! Keep up the good work Munky!

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: [5/5]

The GUru

[Lukashi]

It looks excellent indeed, i would like to see those wires :drool:

[Gkaine]

very nice model...and guru i think it was said in jest...calm down killer;)

[wedge]

it seems his genitals begin a little high up?

looks great other than that... are you going to texture him with a stone texture or something?

[Wiro]

Wow, great model!! It seems really well modeled except for a few things:

the hands, as mentioned, are way too small and the wrist seems flat. Comparing the size of the forearm to the hand it clearly seems off.

the muscle going from the elbow to forearm on the left arm of middle pic looks off as well. It should start a bit lower down on the elbow I think.

the fat and muscle layers at the waist seem to be a bit deformed by his pose. You probably modeled it correctly first but after posing seems like it should be stretched more on the left side.

The muscles around the knees seem a bit too sharp but that may just be the lighting

The muscles on the back don't seem to be as well defined as the rest. A bit too soft and "displacement map" like

his penis does seem to start a bit too high up. a penis doesnt just protrude out of the body...it's root starts behind the scrotum, at least it did last time I checked :D

I don't have a problem including a penis but for aestethic reasons I'd model it smaller and less obvious, pretty much like all nude statues I've seen are done.

The head looks really nice...
hope to see him finished!

Wiro

[spacemunky]

hey thanks for all the advice guys.....i changed a few things based on what people said...but i think this is my last revision cause i want to use this thing for my reel and i need to get a job already so here are some final screen shots and some wires.

http://www.geocities.com/jsistudios/index.html

[Sean Johnston]

Originally posted by Guruabyss
Why is it 10 year old's come to this post and are posting crap like the following:
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I don't know if I could ever find it in me to model a dude's penis though...All my characters until the end of time will hopefully remain action figures

________________________________________________

It takes a real man to put every detail into a model. If you told your lifedrawing teacher that you didn't want to draw a male nude model because you would have to draw his junk, you would be out of the class. Lets grow up eh?

But yes the big toe is a little bit too big. Just use your own foot as an example. But over all GREAT JOB!!!! Keep up the good work Munky!

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: [5/5]

The GUru



How about driving down to your nearest Wal-Mart and purchase a sense of humor as soon as possible :)


Is overreacting to a little joke/comment a vertue of maturity?

[spacemunky]

honestly i have to agree with guru...this is the second figure i have posted.....the first had no genitals.....the second does and about 80% of the comments i get are juevenile jokes about the size of his wang. I mean one joke could be funny...but not in every post...i really value the responses i get on cgtalk so i would appreciate if eveyone could stick to constructive remarks about the model and please save the jokes for another thread......how bout this....i'll post a close up of his junk and everyone who wants to get that humor out can post on that thread:beer:

[spacemunky]

i also wanted to take a sec to thank wiro for his post...it helped alot and i took most of your advice......so thank you very much

[Maximus Groff]

I think its great... IMHO awesome..

Its an art study or for any film ?

:cool:

[spacemunky]

i wish...i just graduated from the Savannah College of Art and Design.....this is something i threw together for my reel because i wanted to show of a model done in xsi which i just learned. I have alot of experience in maya already but i wanted to show some versatility. Thanks for the compliment though......P.S. I am looking for a job:buttrock:

[Maximus Groff]

so am i.... ;)

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