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thebrinc

12-07-2007, 08:49 AM

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Title: Exterior
Name: Ian Brink
Country: South Africa
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay

Hi Guys

This is my latest exterior render of a residential development. I aimed at getting a feeling across of a hot summers day.

c & c welcome

islaSyr

12-07-2007, 11:05 AM

Nice
but Vray can give more good results..

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Baltasound

12-07-2007, 12:38 PM

Nice
but Vray can give more good results..

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Can you please stop posting retarded replies like this?

At the picture:

I like it! Nice job! :)

Jaydeetee

12-07-2007, 12:45 PM

Good work!

I aimed at getting a feeling across of a hot summers day.

The image still appears slightly 'cold', so personally I'd increase the saturation of the light you're using as your sun...making it slightly more orange even. Its just a thought :)

I'm also not sure about the vignetting (the dark 'patches' in the top corners)...I find it a bit overpronounced...but as before, its nothing serious.

Other than that...its a good, clean render!

Where are you from in SA? I'm from Cape Town...

Giom

12-07-2007, 01:26 PM

Hi Ian.

Another great job!

I think your building can do with more texture tho. The surfaces are very even and smooth.

As for hot summer... try to desaturate the image and make it a lot brighter. Then up your contrast so that your tree shadow in the fore ground is very dark and were the sun shines is very bright.

I think that should take care of your summer day.

Regards
Giom

PinQ

12-07-2007, 01:31 PM

Can you please stop posting retarded replies like this?

At the picture:

I like it! Nice job! :)

Why you call that retarted?
I think its a pretty good advice..

better then Nice job...
It doest get him any futher.

JGW

12-08-2007, 02:25 AM

give more focus on the main building, don't let it be that because there is a 3d car in the front and then you have to show it.

ARTECmedia

12-08-2007, 06:32 PM

Still cold. It's not hot summer.
Open in Photoshop and then:
1. Increase Brightness/Contrast (use Levels if you prefere)
2. HUE - WARM
3. MORE saturation
4. ADD some Difussion GLOW

good luck

thebrinc

12-10-2007, 07:04 AM

Thanx for the feedback guys... I'll set up my screens so i can get a better idea of what's going on and then do some corrections.

Jaydeetee, i'm situated in Cape Town as well, looking to relocate to Vancouver though. Know anyone there? hehe

Thanx again

- Ian

thebrinc

12-10-2007, 07:10 AM

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