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Hussain-Kadhem 12-06-2007, 08:30 PM http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/204296/204296_1196976634_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/204296/204296_1196976634_large.jpg)
Title: Venice
Name: Hussain Alkazem
Country: Saudi Arabia
Software: 3ds max, mental ray, Photoshop
Hi every one !
this is my last 3d work .. !
I saw the scene here http://bleedingblack666.deviantart.com/art/venice-WIP-36076981 it was without texture then I decided to impersonate the modeling and put textures .
I took maybe 2 or 3 days in modeling and I spent a lot of time to finish the textures , and it seems good for me especially it's the second time trying to make a dirty textures ..
I used Mentalray as a render engine, and this is the first time I use it .=)
thanks for my friend Ali who made some changes by photoshop and made it looks better . In the other hand I tried to edit it to make it like what my friend made and this is the result .
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mistasam02
12-06-2007, 09:00 PM
Man that is hot :thumbsup:
ctrl.studio
12-06-2007, 10:14 PM
very nice. You should just add a bit of dirty and mud on textures close to water.
max
beautiful, i always like dirty :)
lifelost
12-07-2007, 01:19 AM
I never get tired of scenes like these, maybe some dirt on the windows.
Neox3d
12-07-2007, 05:16 AM
very nice, although im confused about the openings in the middle windows in the stright wall. i guess there is something wrong, but may b its just me. 4 stars from me anyway, love the textures and the water
Hussain-Kadhem
12-07-2007, 10:07 AM
Thanks a lot guys for your kind words , I'm glad for that .
I appreciate that for you .:)
by : Neox3d
very nice, although im confused about the openings in the middle windows in the stright wall. i guess there is something wrong, but may b its just me. 4 stars from me anyway, love the textures and the water
can you tell me what is the wrong ? coz I tried to find out but I didn't find anything obiouse
em,,, actually I don't know , maybe you're right .
anyway , thanks for your comment .. I'm glad you liked it .
Bluecorestudio
12-07-2007, 10:14 AM
It looks really nice, especially I love the water :D
Neox3d
12-07-2007, 10:28 AM
"can you tell me what is the wrong ? coz I tried to find out but I didn't find anything obiouse
em,,, actually I don't know , maybe you're right ."
Well i meant that if you look striaght in the image in the centre theer are two windows that dont have a wooden slide, and show the reflection or something right on the opposite side, i was confused about that, hope u find it.
islaSyr
12-07-2007, 11:30 AM
Very Good ...
Mashallah..
ajcgi
12-07-2007, 01:16 PM
very nice, although im confused about the openings in the middle windows in the stright wall. i guess there is something wrong, but may b its just me. 4 stars from me anyway, love the textures and the water
I'm confused as to why that bridge appears to lead to a wall with a window in it and not a door. It looks as though I'd have to jump out the window onto the bridge to cross it. :S
On a similar note the texturing doesn't seem so great on the bridge in comparison to the rest. Considering it's the focus of the composition, I'd rework that area a little.
Otherwise the work is pretty great!
It's really good. The overall looking of Venice buildings are correct in the image. I quote ctrlstudio: the walls (and the city by itself) is more wet and muddy. The water is too much clean (real channels have a not so clean water...)
IanSkip
12-07-2007, 11:32 PM
Even though the channels really are very dirty, great work on the job. Has a real feeling to it. Awesome.
Hussain-Kadhem
12-08-2007, 04:34 PM
Bluecorestudio
Thanks so much .. I'm glad you liked my work .:)
Neox3d
ahh .. I understood what you mean . Actually I intended to put a reflection just to vary.. and they aren't just two windows that have the reflection .. in fact the three middle windows , but I don't know why the reflection in the third one didn't appear well .
anyway , thanks dear for comment .. :wise:
islaSyr
Thanks a lot for comment ..
I appreciate that .,
Hussain-Kadhem
12-08-2007, 04:50 PM
ajcgi
yah this seems a big mistake I didn't pay attention for it .. :eek: but no problem , anyone wants to cross the bridge can climb it from the left door .. :scream: .
actually the reason why I didn't pay attention for this .. is that I focused on the imitating the orgion photo , so I forgot about it .
anyway, thanks so much for your comment . I appreciate that.
:)
LAV
Thanks dear for your comment .. I'm happy for it .
you're right about walls .. and somewho for water . I made water material according to many refrences I have .
thanks again
IanSkip
Thanks mate .. :thumbsup:
glad to hear that !
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