Character in his set: mOOn

[Vash T Stampede]

Looks Good! I like the set up/camera angle :beer:

[Meka]

Très bon Toce, tu as beaucoup progressé depuis les derniers posts que j'ai vu !!! boboulo :)

[MadS]

I'm really digging this character, but from your WIPs I kinda thought you were going for a much larger creature, like Jaba-da-hut size or something. This tribal look is cool too.

As for crits, the flag hanging from the cross poll thing looks like it is defying the laws of gravity. You should give it some more drag on the rings, and some more angle to it. It just doesn't look natural to me. Maybe even have it drape around the pole a little bit, like there is a breeze blowing. The only other thing that I kinda wondered about is the purpose of this composition. Is he looking at the camera or at the well hatch? Why is he standing there, why is the well lid there? Know what I mean... If this is just a test render from an animated sequence, then cool, but if you are trying to show us an image without any meaning behind it, it just seems uninteresting. It might help if you had more of a focus in the image. The well hatch competes with the character for attention. Maybe if you intensified the light, as if it were mid day with clear skies, and kinda drown out his surroundings in light a little more, and focus in on the character... dunno.

My 2 cents. :)

[Martypt]

I like it.I wish you can make a clearer picture for us. I think the armor type piece on the shoulder looks like it will fall off,I do not see an attachment. But if closer the detials can be seen,please closer view.Another angle as well.
Still it looks very good,I just want more.:thumbsup:

[warhead]

Make him a general from a big army. Sorry, i dont the time to search your whole old thread...what software are you using?

Greetz

[bombyx]

Yeeeeeessssss.....I saw the WIP and I find very cool to finally see him in (still) action, cool image .As for comments, I also thought he would be bigger, and that the flag could use more motion, I also suggest U tweak the texturesto give more contrast and get a wider color scheme, it would enhance (is that correct?!) the character, and I would add a bit of crap in the columns textures (looks tooo clean considering the rest of the composition) to give a "temple ruins" kinda effect .Feel free to send me to hell if that sounds innapropriate .
En tout cas super image, on en veut pluuuuuuus!!!!!!
:applause:

[Maximus Groff]

:beer:

Congrats! perfect!

[toce]

Thanks for the comments, here is my todo list:

_ work on the flag, apply cloth to it (my test worked well but took my maps away, so I have to sort out whhat the probleme is..)

_ re-think the scene (I m thinking of making the character interracting with the well.... in a way)

_ maybe scale up the character

_ break the colomns, make em look more like ruins..

update is coming....

[toce]

update

http://toce.free.fr/moon_decors2.jpg

is it better?

and a color test:

http://toce.free.fr/moon_decors3.jpg

I must find another pose for the character.... please help.. I m in a lot of pain :(

[bombyx]

It's getting better with the updates...........For the pose, since his a prophet, you could try a prophet pose, like one hand on the flag, and the other high above his head, like shouting to the sky for some kind of ancient magic .I think you don't like the pose cause right now he seems kind of static, try to put him in a more dynamic pose, make the camera lense a bit higher to have a more pronounced perspective .Anyway these are just suggestions, I'm waiting for more updates .
Keep up the good work:buttrock:

[dzogchen]

This is a cool looking character! Close up render of him would do him justice;) Good work!:thumbsup:

[toce]

[EDIT] --

[toce]

I decided to tweak back that image a little, here s the final result..


http://toce.3d-station.com/images/3d/moon/closeup.jpg

[hwachai]

amazing work!!!!!!:bounce:

the latest one really cool!!!

wow!!!!!!

[walee]

there you go ! No it looks damn nice :D
Nice work ...
and now, the next step: you are going to animate your monster :scream:

[xavier-marquis]

Nice Work man :) :applause:

[Napa!m]

:drool:

very nice textures

[superfly18]

Awesome man, i LOVE the last picture.

My only complaint is that it seems like there's no physics around there.

His "summoning" this power, looks powerful, but the flag isn't acting as if it is. Looks like "wind" almost in a sense, so everything should be "flying" around. lol. sorry for all the quotes, but i wasn't sure how to explain it. Hope you catch my drift.

[I animate]

Sorry, I don't like the last pose but I do like your character. Good modeling skills. You might want to work on the flag a little more. Still looks pretty stiff.

:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:

[LorenzOO]

welldone toto :)

[behzad]

Just how many hours do you put into your work? Your work is amazing and I know it takes hours to do what you do. Are you working full time and you do this on the side? I would appreciate some feedback. thanks. :applause:

[toce]

thanks for all the replys!

behzad >> I don't realy know how muych time i put into this but it's about hours and hours and hours... I worked on it piece by piece, sometimes I didn't worked on it for weeks.... just when I got time and will beacuse I mainly did him on evenings and week end when I was working full time... Now I'm looking for new job so I have some time to work on a new image (that I will post soon maybe)

[bombyx]

Glad you found time to finish it .It looks much better on the last one!!!
So congratulations:beer:

[Garma]

the first ones reminded me very much of the game Baldur's Gate. I really like the latest updates, especially the posing did the picture very good.

[facial]

amazing work!!!!!!keeppost up :D

[goodlag]

great work on the models and textures

love the enviroment textures:drool:

[aenema]

wow, I really like your last render! looks great :thumbsup:

[gL_spear]

I thought the first one was interesting, until i saw the progress you made with the latest its excellent .... great job!!! :thumbsup:

[Harakys]

mais mais mais....
:wip: :"coucou" et encore bravo, nice work!!:applause: :applause:

[harly]

Wow -that´s quite a cool update.
The color correction is well done.

[Demilliac]

:bowdown: toce :bowdown:

[ak-sm]

amazing work. Love it.

[Sniv]

YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH It rocks :buttrock:

Great work Toce :beer:

[garyturner]

yeah ca roxx :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

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