Character : Bikini Girl

[Vash T Stampede]

Dunno Can't log in:shrug:

[athosghost]

ditto

[dickma]

Oh sorry, I post it in LW forum......so it may be not viewable if you're not member...

Sorry Everyone. Let me think a good method to post then.

[dickma]

I only got 30000 bytes upload limit....

[wedge]

hot? no.... her bikini bottoms could double as a sail.

[Magic]

I'm not really familiar with womens clothing (dôh :P) but i think that bikini could hold 2 Double D breasts. the picture itself is really nice (though not the kind of women i'd like to see).

[dickma]

you mean bikini size too big and not enough sexy?!

Oh, I don't like make it too porno.....

Just make it fresh and healthy...

[wayfaerer]

It's a nice picture though the face seems a bit maskulin for my taste

[Sean Johnston]

Actually the waist-to-hips ratio is rather off...


Otherwise, not a bad model. Not really my taste in women, but it's well done...

[arjun]

That "Fresh and Healthy" thing is now officially the funniest thing I ever heard. :beer:


Again the model is good, it just needs lots of refining. Keep up the good work!

[dickma]

Oh I use a wrong adjective.. something like describing milk products.........

I mean fresh outlook with healthy body.

[qwatkins]

Maybe its just me but the hands look non-feminine, kinda like that one Seinfield episode.

and her left leg is quite large where the thigh joins the pelvis.

Also, the head size relationship is a little bit small for the body.

[dickma]

Because the legs are seperated a little bit to make a pose.
and also at the bottom part, the edge of the of the bikini I make it a little down from pelvis to leg...

You know sometimes when we make clothings for characters we will delete the poly below the clothing surface, to avoid poly collision problems causing rendering artifacts.

this time I didn't do so.....and I think it is quite danger to make cloths that too sticky to the skin.

[lebada]

turn off..lol..she's not a hottie...shes okay as a character but nothing special:shrug:

[cgwolf]

um, not hot. Why? 3 reasons.

1. The Man hands!
2. The Crotch buldge!
3. The Face!


not Necessarily in that order... give those three some work and she should hopefully appear a lot cuter.

[CENOBITE]

you need to make the neck smaller... it is too wide.

She is 'fresh outlook' with 'healthy body'. (somthing's lost in the translation).

[cgwolf]

I agree the neck is a bit wide as well

[HapZungLam]

Nice to see you here Dick.:bounce:

Hey, great improvement. Keep it up dude.

[Marina]

I agree with which her neck is very wide. Also, her head is very small for her body, the waist, you should remember, it should be of the same width that the head.
Also, there is something strange in her poses, something in the leg that is not well. You are going for the right way, you only have to fix these things.

good luck!

[John Lee]

Hi there

Good attemp but to honest i think hse could look alot more attractive? It's a good model bUt with a bit of sizing down here and there she would be HOT!!! I think the overall body frame could be smaller and i would out her ina more attractive pose. You need to put more of a curve in waist and hips area, Shoulders are too broad. Buy some marie claire mags and you will get a good idea of HOT hehe

I hope this helps

John

[lerpiedood]

Hot? No. I think she looks a bit like a female superman in a bikini. The short haircut with the curl does not work well. Her shoulders look a bit rubbery and the connection of legs to hips is reall puffy and disturbing.

[Konstruct]

holy crap, I bet she could split some WIGs with soulders like that

[Turbonium]

I agree. Like mentioned before, head too small for body, and arms (especially hands) like a guy like in that Seinfeld episode...

The leg (where it joins to hips) looks contorted or twisted. You got the anatomy all wrong. Hint: Key to making a girl to look hot is getting the anatomy spot-on.

Note: Neck too thick... Facial features not really that 'sexy', the way they're set up.

[dickma]

Improved Image:

[qwatkins]

The shoulders and deltoid muscles look better.

There is too much gap between legs in the crotch area. Women who have legs this size have no space right below the crotch, in fact only very skinny borderline anorexia women have space right below the crotch.

The face is cute in a sort of boyish way. You might try widening the mouth a bit and making the lips a little more luscious.

Also, her left hand in the palm area looks a bit square, try tapering it more toward the wrist

Keep swingin'

[foodi]

nice render

coupla measurements are off tho

as already mentioned

wrist to palm:
women's palms are usually only slightly wider than their wrists

upper arm to shoulder:
upper arm is far too thick.. especially the right arm in the pic

neck to shoulders:
whereas teh shoulder width is alright, i think.. the bulge from teh shoulder musclesmake them look wider. also neck could be more slender and maybe even longer?

hips to waist:
i think teh hips are way too wide.. should generally coinicde with shoulder width.

finally.. teh entire bikini just seems a coupla sizes too large.. infact if you look at it hard enough.. it almost looks like its her back side we're looking at (waist down) hehe

anyways.. would like to see it after soem improvements!!

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