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opcarq
12-04-2007, 06:13 AM
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Title: Dorm - studio 506
Name: José Alberto Rodríguez Solano
Country: Costa Rica
Software: Maxwell Render, Maya, mental ray, Photoshop

Hi everyone, this is an Interior we did for the office..The design and material choices were based on an actual design from an existing project given to us by the client: Arq Marlo Trejos from Studio506
Shimrodd
12-04-2007, 03:27 PM
Nice shot ! :) I like how the light enters the room.


I would suggest 2 or 3 things :

- I would add more contrast, especially in the shadows projected on the floor (seat on the left, the TV furniture, etc.

- Chamfering some edges could soften some shapes and adds a interesting specular, like on the TV it-self, or the carpet's edges.

- increase the sampling, there's a lot of noise.

- an AO pass for the edges between walls and ceiling


Sorry to post so much critics on a finished work, I just want to be constructive. ;)
najjaci
12-04-2007, 05:26 PM
Nice one.
You should call it grey room.
What tha... Put some color on it bro!It will be better that the bed and the chair are in some warm color.

Cheers!
Neox3d
12-05-2007, 06:49 AM
i like the shader of the ceiling
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