Sci-Fi Marine [WIP|Crit|Suggestions]

[urgaffel]

Yay, low budget armor using rubberstraps to keep the shoulder guards in place ;)

[Jhonus]

really nice expression, and really nice modelling

skin shader looks very blotchy, not sure if you are going for that look or not.

crease in the corner of the eye looks really weird on the first picture, although it looks ok in the second picture.

armour looks a little toyish and plastich at the mo, but i'm sure you'll fix that.

:beer: cool work tho...

[RockinAkin]

Very nice start!

I think theres too much color variation on the skin shader, especially on the scalp and cheeks.

Looking good so far... keep it up!
-DivideByZero-

[RmachucaA]

yes, lessen the skin bloches, he looks like he has skin cancer. Maybe darken his skin a tone or two, and the wrinkles at the eye edges on the outside are a little bit too much, lessen them and make some more smaller ones, its looking good keep it up!

[BiTMAP]

the dirt on the face obviously needs tweeking since everyone thinks its just skin, and the metal has a great chance of looking amazing :D I can't wait to see what you do wit it.

[SirManfred]

Okay
http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/arghus23.jpg

[Izu]

WOOOH!! u´r artwork is amazing...i love your work...can i plz pm u and ask how u did some stuff... ??:wavey: ´

[Troub]

whow...you gave him lots of personality.
hope to see it finished

[spacemunky]

very nice work on the head...the only suggestion would be to give the armor some age to it. Other than that it rocks:buttrock:

[SirManfred]

Yeah, thanks guys :)
Update comming soon! :wip:

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