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Vilperi
12-01-2007, 10:54 AM
Hi everyone! Here's my latest 2D WIP. The title says it all. Beast slaying fella has slayed a giant beast at some old ruined buildings.

I'd like to her your thoughts about the composition.
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/1070/beast02et0.jpg
Vilperi
12-01-2007, 02:24 PM
Little update
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/4480/beast03we7.jpg
Vilperi
12-03-2007, 03:59 PM
What do you think about this new composition?
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7384/beast04sx1.jpg
CybrGfx
12-03-2007, 06:38 PM
I like the proportions, but it has too much of a downward tilt to it. With the pose of the slain giant, it looks like he died trying to keep from sliding down and off the LH bottom, and there's still no guarantee he won't slide off after death... ;)
Ferril
12-05-2007, 11:21 AM
the creature's head is laying on the ground or it's trying to raise it? The shadow under it’s head makes it difficult to understand. I’d like to see more progress though ;)
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