CHARACTER - I need help

[rrobert]

Head is to small when you look at the front..

And bottomlip goes down to far...

(is this what you want..? ):shrug:

good work :thumbsup:

[spm]

Originally posted by Straightmark
Head is to small when you look at the front..

And bottomlip goes down to far...

(is this what you want..? ):shrug:

good work :thumbsup:

thanks. im aware of the things you marked though :). my biggest issue at the moment is the eye thing... so if you know a tutorial it would be great :)

there are a lot of other things still to be tweaked, but again, the EYES! :D they really bug me :scream:

[spm]

what!? is there no one out there who can guide me here? :)

[spm]

very little feedback so far... i wonder why? ;)

anyway, heres an update. not too much big stupp, mainly small pokes here and there. the eyes look much better. i didnt find a tutorial so i had to do it the hard way :)

no texuted details so far, no hair and stuff either. just a shader to make the head more alive.

im planning to make a full body for him too so references besides fineart.sk are welcome if anyone wants to help :)

http://www.solander.org/upload/head02.jpg

[spm]

same but from a different angle...

http://www.solander.org/upload/head03.jpg

[spm]

greetings, you silent ones. heres an update. i use maya and ps.

http://www.solander.org/upload/head11.jpg

[altmeister]

looks good to me ...
try to get a better ... mhm connection for the ear to the head

(sorry my english is not so good)

[spm]

Originally posted by altmeister
looks good to me ...
try to get a better ... mhm connection for the ear to the head

(sorry my english is not so good)

ive actually become aware of the ear-thing lately. many ppl have commented on exactly the same thing as you, and also the sides of the mouth :)

also, i think, the ear looks like plastic :P. im working with the head on evenings when my working hours end... an hour here an hour there and so on. lets see how much time ill get in the future. atm we are in a crunch.

[spm]

*bounce*

[hypercube]

hmm..might be a routing/net issue, but I'm only getting broken image links here..can't see it. :hmm:

[spm]

Originally posted by hypercube
hmm..might be a routing/net issue, but I'm only getting broken image links here..can't see it. :hmm:

damn, seems like my default server is having problems from time to time :(

[spm]

an update... ive started on some clothing

http://www.solander.org/upload/head27.jpg

[JoBbE]

I like were you're going! keep it up! and put some textures on that hood :)

[spm]

Originally posted by JoBbE
I like were you're going! keep it up! and put some textures on that hood :)

yupp, coming up :)

but first ill have to wade through the hell of UV-mapping

[spm]

...and textured

http://www.solander.org/upload/head29.jpg

[xerozz]

i think the face needs more work :thumbsdow

[psumo]

the lower lip line looks too sharp
the lips pinch to a point in the coner try overlapping the upper lip over the bottom

The eyes lids look to regular kinda like the shape of a football. Try adding my vertices and making them more uneven

[spm]

Originally posted by xerozz
i think the face needs more work :thumbsdow

what did you have in mind?

[pica$$0]

I am new at this, but it looks like the head is turned around. It looks like the clothing is facing away from us and that he just turned his head all the way around. Maybe you could adjust the clothing to make it appear different or maybe it's just me. Nice modeling though!

[pica$$0]

xerozz - why are you banned?

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