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Aesculapius
11-24-2007, 04:38 AM
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Title: "The Beacon" 1 bedroom Condo
Name: Joseph Alfred Garcia
Country: Philippines
Software: 3ds max, VRay

I did the modeling, texturing and rendering of this one bedroom condo unit for a friend. They wanted a sort of modern design to it so i added lots of brushed metal and a mirror by the dining set to make it look spacious. The camera gives away that fact becuse i really had to adjust the zoom factor to make this whole area fit. You can just imagine how small this area is.
JLLilley
11-26-2007, 03:46 AM
Great look like the image. Only crit everything is too perfect and symmetrical. Needs some chaos like a real person lived there.

But, great render. Like the shaders, and lighting.
JGW
11-26-2007, 03:57 AM
the camera angle should be a little more normal, it's not a very big scene, no need for a so wide angle, the rendering is very good
Aesculapius
11-26-2007, 04:01 AM
Thank you very much for the crit. I do agree that it does look too clean. I do architectural work and most of our clients of the company require this certain type of look from us and as well as some of the clients i do freelance work for. I'll try to do some of your suggestions on some of my next work (of course if I can talk the client into allowing me to do so, hehehe).
Yup the camera angle did distort the image but I needed to zoom out a tad bit because they wanted me to squeeze all of the elments into the frame :)
nado319
11-26-2007, 02:15 PM
good job . it looks real....
think you need more dark corners to add more depth .
Aesculapius
11-26-2007, 03:21 PM
Thanks for the crit nado319... You have a very impressive showreel there :)
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