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Title: Don't Mess With My Tutu
Name: David Marsh
Country: United Kingdom
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay
This is my Strange Behaviour entry. The background story is:
"Introducing the new star pupil of Ms Tingle's Ballet School For Girls - former builder and rugby player, Andy Marsh.
A warning to all men undergoing a mid-life crisis but who cannot afford a Porsche."
The two main characters are based on my parents and I am very pleased with the likeness - especially my dad.
Modelling has been done in 3dsMax, rendering is VRay.
You can view a high res version here: www.bluefrogdigital.com/strangebehaviour.html
Hope you like.
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The faces are great, but where is the reflection of the girls in the mirror? The 4 on the right side are missing.
EDIT: Forgot to give you stars :-) *4*
/Patrick
kiboSVK
11-22-2007, 10:50 AM
funny idea nice render 4*:thumbsup:
Baltasound
11-22-2007, 12:05 PM
The pose from the 3rd girl from the right is a tad weird, but very funny render :)
jankvollmer
11-22-2007, 01:02 PM
great, just great!!! 5* from me.
greetings
jan k. vollmer
joebattleartist
11-22-2007, 04:29 PM
Very funny and profoundly disturbing at the same time. Great work.
Thanks for the resource at http://www.bluefrogdigital.com/acatalog/adamandeve.html (http://www.bluefrogdigital.com/acatalog/adamandeve.html)
Love the way Eve has a bite of apple in her cheek.
Joe
this is awesome. Idea is brilliant and characters are very powerful. Poses are really appealing. I'm missing some environment details though, room looks like a box and piano seems not up to par with the rest of the scene...4*
Great work overall :thumbsup:
TheRazorsEdge
11-22-2007, 05:27 PM
LOL
This made my day today! :thumbsup:
pseudonympending
11-22-2007, 05:31 PM
Hey guys, cheers for some great posts :thumbsup: Here's a couple of stills from the work in progress for anyone who's interested:
http://www.davemarsh3d.co.uk/CGTalk/Old_Guy_02.jpg
http://www.davemarsh3d.co.uk/CGTalk/Old_Guy_01.jpg
Petz, where is the reflection of the girls in the mirror? The 4 on the right side are missing
They are there but they are just cropped by the frame. The camera has a deceptively big lens as it was the only way I could get the characters positioned where I wanted them, beneath his arms - I think that's why the reflections aren't quite where you'd expect to see them.
Cheers for you post.
kiboSVK, thanks man :thumbsup:
Baltasound, oddly other epople have said that's their favorite - personally I think her right arm could be better but I like the way she is clasping her mouth in shock. Cheers for pointing it out.
jankvollmer, nice one :thumbsup:
joebattleartist, Thanks for the resource at http://www.bluefrogdigital.com/acatalog/adamandeve.html (http://www.bluefrogdigital.com/acatalog/adamandeve.html)
Hey, no worries, glad you find it useful. It's a pretty humble beginning but I plan to expand things a lot whislt keeping the price low and the quality high. Cheers man.
DDS, Cheers dude. That's a fair call on the environment - with deadlines looming I had to run with what I had, ieally i would have liked to get a lot more detail in. Glad you like it though, thanks for your post.
TheRazorsEdge, glad to hear it :thumbsup:
This has really got alot of character. Very good how you showed each persons thoughts about Mr. tutu, since he is upstaging everyone.:)
But what lets down the image a bit, is that repetativeness of the lady holding the rail. But can be overlooked as my eyes are brought to the charcaters in the foreground.
Otherwise this is a very good piece. :thumbsup: I think the instructor is pleased.
stefanosoik
11-22-2007, 09:07 PM
lol very funny!! I like your unique ideas :arteest:
Siahpoosh
11-22-2007, 09:10 PM
hi david
your character is perfect and awesome
but i think your scene need some details, i think you can create a some big depth for your scene.
your idea is very great and funny
(sorry for my bad english)
OSBOURNE
11-23-2007, 07:51 AM
very funny
bearfoot
11-23-2007, 08:29 AM
really nice work david..
one slight crit is that i would have made his expression happier.. but thats a personal pref..
cheers and congrats.,.
brentagain
11-23-2007, 11:17 AM
really good work,origional idea for sure:)
The only thing I noticed right away is the cloned bodies,and all the women seem to have unusually large feet:)
rickycox
11-23-2007, 12:42 PM
looks good, but too many clones in the bgd
ilusiondigital
11-25-2007, 07:56 PM
Hey friend!! Very nice picture, congrats and good luck in the challenge
morfeaus
11-26-2007, 05:37 PM
hahaha that's coooooooool !! mpravooo
mosena
11-27-2007, 04:32 AM
hahah very funny idea! the face of the girls are very funny...nice render too...
ahh if you have time comment mine too... hehe tnks
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