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Pentagramma
01-08-2002, 10:51 PM
Hi folks,


My first WIP images...

Lots and lots of work still to do; its basically shapes for now - no details, clothes, prosthetic piece (or spoon! :D ) yet.

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.com.br/wip/pirate_wip12.jpg

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.com.br/wip/pirate_wip14.jpg

(and an update... 01/18/02)

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.com.br/wip/pirata1.jpg

Any comments are welcome...

el gatto
01-08-2002, 10:56 PM
I don't see your pictures !! :(

Pentagramma
01-08-2002, 11:07 PM
Strange; they seem OK to me....:confused:

It could be a "Geocities" situation - Ill upload them to another site, and edit the post, ASAP.

alben
01-08-2002, 11:25 PM
cool looking dude.

marioucci
01-09-2002, 09:13 AM
hey penta,
i cant see it either..
fix it quickly man!!!
cant wait to see it:)

pascal_blanche
01-09-2002, 09:57 AM
you can see them there: http://www.3dluvr.com/camargo/wip/

grate style pentagramma , very bug like, actually the only character with wings that fledge asked for .. btw.. fledge, how things are goig? anything to show to your friends?:D :D

marioucci
01-09-2002, 11:08 AM
thanks for the link pascal:)
pentagramma,
great character man!!! the design is very well put together and his head is very original.
what are u planning for him next??

Pentagramma
01-09-2002, 11:32 AM
Thanks, folks! :)

Im trying to use every proposed characteristic for the challenge, in a not so humanoid design.

The "bone" structure in the head is something like a ressonance box, and I suppose he uses it to generate high-pitch sounds. Its not really made of bone, its more like a mollusk shell.

The tall guy comes from a low-gravity , dense atmosphere enviroment. Even so, I suppose he cant fly with those small wings, but maybe they can help him in huge jumps - when the need arrives.

Logan, Im planning his wardrobe right now, probably something that leaves a lot of skin exposed. Ill try a pirate-like wardrobe, with maybe a few twists.

Pascal, thanks for the help with the link... but I really would like to show the images right on the post. Any suggestions??
:(

marioucci
01-09-2002, 11:54 AM
pentagramma,
try here :
www.hpg.com.br
they allow image links in there and its free!!

Golgoth_bla
01-09-2002, 12:05 PM
very good design... nothing else to say
maybe put more.... humanity
he look more like a creature and not like a character

Pentagramma
01-09-2002, 01:40 PM
At last, it seems like its working (the direct link to the images).
Sorry for all the trouble, folks...


(Valeu pela dica, Logan! :D )


Golgoth_bla, thanks! And I totally agree with you - he looks just a creature, without clothes and gadgets.

Ill focus on that, next.

Pentagramma
01-10-2002, 06:59 PM
Hi there...

Heres a small update - one more in a couple of hours! ;)

Started working on the clothes, and a little bit of Ray Diffuse for good measure...

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.ig.com.br/wip/pirataRD1.jpg

Pentagramma
01-11-2002, 08:47 AM
There you go. :)

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.ig.com.br/wip/pirate_wip20.jpg

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.ig.com.br/wip/pirate_wip21.jpg

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.ig.com.br/wip/pirate_wip22.jpg

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.ig.com.br/wip/pirate_wip22RD.jpg

pascal_blanche
01-11-2002, 10:11 AM
nice! it's gonna be the wierdest character of all :D :D

epatnor
01-11-2002, 02:11 PM
Great character! Some weird/cool dude..! Very nice indeed :)

Pentagramma
01-11-2002, 03:21 PM
Thanks a lot, Pascal & Epatnor!

But, weird? Really, guys, whats so weird about a six-eyed, four-winged insectoid pirate?

(As a matter of fact, we have lots of them here in Brazil! :D )

marioucci
01-11-2002, 06:23 PM
man ure creating one of the coolest characters so far man:)
and one of the funniest too!!!
keep it up!

Pentagramma
01-11-2002, 07:49 PM
Valeu, Logan! :D

And thanks, for inviting me to the Challenge. It has been a great experience so far .

Just looking at the other entries is very educational - I hope someday I can do a work so nice as one of those beauties! :) :)

Pentagramma
01-11-2002, 11:39 PM
A small update...

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.com.br/wip/espada2.jpg

http://www.pentagramma.hpg.com.br/wip/espada3.jpg

Joebount
01-13-2002, 11:31 AM
Excellent ! I really love the sword. :)

Pentagramma
01-13-2002, 12:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Joe! :D

marioucci
01-13-2002, 02:17 PM
wow man!!!
what can i say about that sword!!!!
beautiful, very stylish!!!
very tim burton(ish).
i love it:)
keep it up man!!!

Pentagramma
01-13-2002, 03:10 PM
Thanks Logan! :D

I havent tried to emulate Tim Burton style - at least, consciously. It happens hes really influential to me (like Giger, Barlowe, Gilliam, and others).

But I confess: I specially love his style. Love those non-symmetrical spirals, nauseating color stripes , bug-eyes and such...
Wish I could create a character as cool as Vincent, or Beetlejuice, or Jack Skellington, or...


Is there a doctor (or a genie!;)) in the house?

goodlag
01-13-2002, 03:10 PM
it looks cool!~

good work

pascal_blanche
01-13-2002, 05:18 PM
nice sword :D

Pentagramma
01-13-2002, 07:33 PM
Thank you guys! :D :D

BTW, my next update will take a few days - lots of things still to do ...

epatnor
01-15-2002, 08:21 AM
I still think that you have one of the best designs yet... :) :) :)

Pentagramma
01-16-2002, 06:32 PM
Patrik,

Thanks! I hope you enjoy what Im working on, right now... :D :D :D

I expect to have a reasonable update by the end of the week - and maybe I can give a few anxious fellas one more reason to nuke Brasil! ;)

And what about you? When are you entering on all this fun?

epatnor
01-17-2002, 01:56 PM
I'm not. Check out my reply in the Challenge WIP: KFC thread... I just love to bug you guys! :p

Krep Suzeth
01-18-2002, 01:12 PM
Hi !

Its the most .... surprising fellow of the contest !

Great modeling ! The sword is very very nice, great design !

You told about an update before this week end .... :D Waiting ....

Krep

Pentagramma
01-18-2002, 05:22 PM
Ahoy! :)

This is my new update... I just added the prosthetic wing, and Im working at wardrobe right now. I really would appreciate any feedback, positive or negative.

Im specially concerned with the "friendly factor". Does this guy look like a, well, guy, or Im still at creature/monster territory?? :confused:

Krep: Thanks a lot for the "surprising"! Hope you like this one... :D

( Please notice hes armless on the images, for display purposes)



http://www.pentagramma.hpg.com.br/wip/pirata1.jpg
http://www.pentagramma.hpg.com.br/wip/pirata2.jpg

sigma
01-18-2002, 05:25 PM
wooh, now thats original.
Nice job Pentagramma.
Love the details

fernando
01-18-2002, 06:38 PM
Hey , nice work .
but . I heard that you was at home , sick , and thats why you dont went to work today .
hmmmm ...

anyway , a great job ;)

Pentagramma
01-18-2002, 08:24 PM
Sigma : Thanks a lot!

fernando : Youve heard correctly , I am sick and at home - but Im getting better (thank you for asking!). Also, thanks for the comment! :)

Luiz Felippe VZ
01-20-2002, 02:16 PM
Camargo, That's absolutelly fantastic! His clothes and wings are one of the most original and well designed ones I've already seen in this forum!

Congratulations man!

best regards,

Post Scriptum: T ficando muito legal mesmo! Incrvel como ele evoluiu tanto em to pouco tempo! O do Fernando tambm t muito show! Vc j viu os ltimos updates dele?

abraos,

Pentagramma
01-20-2002, 04:02 PM
Fellipe,

Thanks a lot! I specially appreciate the compliment coming from you - youre one of the better and faster modellers I know.

Im still worried If Im on the right track, on this. Any comments/crits are welcome, OK? :) :)

Krep Suzeth
01-21-2002, 09:23 AM
Hi Pentagramma ! That's great !

I really like the concept, and the humour !
Good modeling, nice details....

Love it !

Krep

Joebount
01-21-2002, 10:19 AM
Kick ass ! :) Just add a mouth maybee.

Pentagramma
01-21-2002, 04:59 PM
Krep and Joe - thanks a lot! :) Im really glad you guys like it...

And, Joe - I agree with you, the mouth could be a nice touch.
Actually, I had tried something like that already, but it wasnt working at all. Ill try another kind of mouth...

stark-001
01-21-2002, 06:37 PM
yes this sword, was really well Done ...

Bravo ...

1st Post here...

Pentagramma
01-21-2002, 08:00 PM
Hi there Stark-001,

Thank you - I hope you enjoy what Im planning for him next!

And thanks, too, for "wasting" your first post with me... :D

stark-001
01-21-2002, 10:25 PM
dont thank me
Heya !!! Cool !!!
:D

Pentagramma
01-22-2002, 01:08 PM
Hi everybody,

I would like to let you know that Ill probably miss the deadline - I have too much work around here... And thats sad, because it was a very nice experience so far.

Anyway, thanks a lot to everybody who made sugestions to my WIP : you guys are really cool!
And rest assured that, ASAP, Ill complete it, and post it - even if at the regular 3d artwork section.

To the other challengers, good luck, and have fun! :)

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