Hello Im new, I would like a critique!

[BabaYaga]

Good concept, lot of potential with good texturing, lil nickeling going on as well, over all I really like it o_0

[Stimpy]

heh, like the idea and the design. and the fact that hes wearing pants.

only thing bothering me are his shoes /legs though.. i think they could be a bit more robot like, just like his hands

[rrobert]

His mouth is a printer? interesting idea!! :p
nice

[Vash T Stampede]

"Hello Im new, I would like a critique! "

Do you want fries with that?



Bwhahahaa......*ugh*


anyway It looks cool.....Texture it ;)

[rrobert]

Not funny Vash......

......hmm..

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he, YES it IS funny!!!! :cool:

sorry:surprised hihi

[Temporal]

Welcome :)

Very nice model roomie, it vaguely reminds me of one of those robots from Syberia

Keep it coming

[BabaYaga]

No that wasnt funny Vash, do you usually go out of your way to belittle people, or do you just do it online where your safe.

[Goon]

Hehehe. You just sunk to his level.
Whats funny is his title works, he's already got like 8 sort of constructive posts.

But yeah back to the topic, it looks interesting. How long have you been doing cg? Can we see the wires? and whatr you going to do with it.

[Teknobabel]

Good work man, I dig your style. Here are my crits:
First, the hands look too small. Compared to the size of the head/body, they seem like childerens hands. Next, the boots. They're much too plain, they need something. They're just a bit boring in my opinion, I don't know any boots that didn't have soles/fasteners/etc. Of course, I don't know any robots that have a printer for a mouth, either :)
For purely aesthetic reasons, I'd like to see something on the chest as well. All that flat space just seems like a waste to me. It's a perfect place to show your detailin skillz.
The mechanics of the arms are a bit too simple for my taste, but it fits in with the overall simpleness of the machine, so its no big deal.
Welp, those're my crits. Good job overall, inventive design.

-Tek

[essahc]

I can't wait to see this finished. I agree about the small hands and the boots don't look finished. This is great work, please keep us posted.:bounce: :airguitar

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